Sunday, May 18, 2014

Sample Sunday: Excerpt From Chapter One of "Buried Uunder Clutter: A Tina Tales Mystery" by Jan Christensen

Please welcome back Texas author Jan Christensen who shares the opening from her latest book, Buried Under Clutter. This is the second novel in her Tina Tales series following 2012’s Organized To Death which I reviewed here. After the synopsis below is the excerpt from Chapter One. For more on her books and writing in general make sure you check out her website at: http://www.janchristensen.com


BURIED UNDER CLUTTER SYNOPSIS

Following the first in the Tina Tales series, Organized to Death, Jan Christensen’s newest mystery novel is called Buried Under Clutter.

 Someone screams inside the old, neglected Victorian house next door, and Tina Shaw runs to find out what’s wrong. A woman bursts out the door saying her aunt is dead. Murdered. Tina notices that the hallway is piled high with cartons. Later when the woman begs her to help clean up the house, Tina hesitates. She’s just begun a career as a professional organizer, though, and her hands itch to start on a new job. 

As Tina sifts through the clutter, she finds clues the murdered woman left behind. She learns the woman was rich, and all her relatives are suspects. But when the will is read, Tina and her family also become suspects. After her mother is arrested, Tina begins investigating in earnest with the help of her boyfriend, Hank (the Hunk). Will she find out who the killer is before her own life is put in danger?


CHAPTER 1


The scream pierced the cold winter air. Tina whirled around in her driveway and stared at the old, decaying Queen Anne next door, then began running toward it. Fumbling in her bag for her cell phone, she stumbled on the cracked sidewalk leading to the house. 

Another scream. 

Tina dashed up the steps to the porch, then hesitated at the front door. Common sense told her not to go in. She dialed nine-one-one and waited. The silence from inside the house seemed more ominous than the screams.

Dispatch answered on the second ring. “What is your emergency?”

“Someone screaming next door to my house.”

“Address?” 

Tina told her. “I’m standing outside. Should I go in?”

Before the dispatcher could answer, a distraught-looking woman burst out of the front door and banged into Tina, making her drop her cell. Tina bumped against the rotten railing, which gave way behind her. She caught herself by grabbing onto the also-decaying post. At least it saved her from flying into the dead bushes in front.

“Sorry. Sorry,” the woman mumbled. Her eyes were wide, her face pale as death. She ran her hand through her brown hair and plopped herself down on the faded green metal chair in front of the bay window. Tina shuddered. The paint was peeling. What would it do to the woman’s clothes? Nice clothes; expensive clothes, she noticed.

“What’s wrong?” Tina began to search for her phone. A stench from the open front door made her hesitate, but she couldn’t place the smell, so she continued the hunt.

“My aunt. It’s my aunt. She’s… she’s dead.” 

“Mrs. Blackwell’s dead?” Tina stopped looking for her cell and stared at the woman. 

A tinny voice from under the glider helped Tina find her phone.

“Hello? You there? Hello?”

“Yes.” Tina grabbed the phone and looked for a place to sit down because her legs were shaking. Nothing appealed to her—the other metal chairs were rusting and the glider looked dangerous. 

“Apparently there’s a dead woman in the house. Her niece found her just now.”

Mrs. Blackwell’s niece nodded. And nodded. Couldn’t seem to stop. Tina asked her, “You the one who was screaming? Is anyone else in there?”

More nodding. Then a shake of the head.

Tina made an effort to loosen her cramping hand on the cell. “She was screaming, but she’s not hurt. There’s no one else here. That we know of.”

A lone siren sounded, coming closer. The patrol car stopped in front, and two officers jumped out and ran toward the house.  Another siren wailed, and an ambulance parked behind the police car.

Tina saw her mother and great-uncle come through their front door and approach the yard. Her mother’s eyes were wide and a little frightened. Uncle Bob had his service dog on her leash and had a determined set to his jaw. Here comes trouble. Tina said goodbye to the dispatcher and faced the two officers. 

“Who called? And why?” the one who had been driving asked.

Mrs. Blackwell’s niece didn’t answer, so Tina said, pointing to her, “I called. She found her aunt inside. Dead.”

The officers dashed inside, the EMTs close behind. 

“What’s going on?” Tina’s mother asked. “Olivia’s dead?” She gave the niece a sharp look. “Jenny, you all right?”

So, her mother knew the niece. Why wasn’t Tina surprised? Tina didn’t remember ever seeing her before. Must not have been a frequent visitor.

Jenny nodded. Tina noticed she wasn’t tearful. Just shocked.

The smell coming from the house was getting to her. She approached the doorway and peeked inside. Recoiled. The place was crammed with junk, piled to the ceiling in the hallway. It smelled like a dumpster in there. Tina backed away and caught her mother’s eye. Laura frowned at her and raised her eyes heavenward. So, she knew Mrs. Blackwell had been a hoarder. 

Why hadn’t Laura told her about that? Tina had come back to Newport just a few months ago and started a professional organizing business. Laura should have known Tina would be interested in a hoarder living right next door. Oh, right, Mom didn’t approve of my new profession. She certainly wouldn’t want me anywhere near this awful mess. Tina had no enthusiasm for mucking around in there, either.

One of the officers, the cuter one with the spikey blond hair, stepped onto the porch. He held a white handkerchief over his nose, and his eyes were watering. But he wasn’t crying. Tina realized the stench caused the tears.

He talked to the radio on his shoulder as he moved down the steps and onto the cracked sidewalk. “We need the M.E. Yes, looks like a homicide.”

Jan Christensen ©2014

2 comments:

Susan Oleksiw said...

This sounds like a fascinating story--no telling what is hidden in all those boxes. And the smell! Hoarding is a hot topic right now. You've picked a good one, Jan.

Jan Christensen said...

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Susan. Glad you think the topic is timely.