Please welcome author Eleanor Cawood Jones
today to the blog as she discusses her participation in the new book, Murder
on the Beach: A Destination Murders Short Story Collection.
Inspiration
on Demand: Where do you go when there’s nowhere to go?
I admit it. When it comes to firm commitments, this
short story writer has gotten a bit spoiled by entering anthology calls for
submissions. Look! An open call for a neat looking subject! And, hey! The
deadline is coming, but it’s not technically my deadline. It’s only my
deadline if I want it to be. No one is sitting around waiting for me to enter
(except the voices in my head, which want to enter everything).
Inspiration doesn’t strike by deadline? No problem.
Don’t try out for that one; there’s another one coming up with a different cool
theme, and for that I’m grateful.
It's a distinct lack of pressure.
But when that magic moment comes and you’re actually
invited to contribute to a book, the editors smile at you and hand you a
deadline and it’s alarmingly real. Deadline? What’s that? An entire new set of
emotions arrives and sets up camp in your frontal lobe. You must perform! You
must come up with an idea, and not just any idea, but the best idea ever!
Everyone’s waiting for you to send in a story which will be a good fit with
your colleagues’ work, which you already know will be excellent because you’ve
read every one of them.
The deadline is six months off! Then Five. Four. Do I
hear three?
Two and a half?
Recently, I was invited to join a group of writers to
create Murder on the Beach, Book 1 in the Destination Murders series.
And even though I was wild about the cozy, humorous concept, my co-writers, and
even the book cover—plus, I’m a beach lover—when I sat down to write, something
terrible happened: nothing. Even though I’d recently visited Cabo San Lucas,
which is a place screaming for a mystery if there ever was one, no characters
showed up to talk in my head, no potential crime reared its ugly head, no
clever plot twist showed up, and panic was starting to set in.
I talked it over with co-author Barb Goffman and
narrowed down with her that the deadline pressure was what was getting to me
and that I wasn’t the only one, I took long walks, I made Alexa play ocean
noises, I interviewed friends for weird beach stories, I flipped through twenty
billion beach photos on my phone. I even asked customers at work, “Hey! What’s
a great way to kill someone in Mexico on the beach? (After a few weird looks, I
added the word “imaginary” between “great” and “way.”) I even tried the old
standby, just sit back down and write and see what happens. Or blow something
up.
Nothing.
Then something completely unrelated happened. I got
called to jury duty. It was for a truly horrific crime—a gang-related
kidnapping and murder—and, even though I ultimately didn’t get selected to sit
on the jury, I understood how traumatic it would be to do so and live through what
the victim and families had experienced. I wasn’t about to write about the
trial itself, but as I stood in line waiting for yet another round of panel
selection, I looked out the window and thought about how the jury members would
bond as they sat through the trial, and how possibly some of them would become
friends, share meals together, and ultimately even go to the beach together and
put some of the trauma behind them. Because, seriously, what could go wrong in
paradise?
They wouldn’t have much in common except the shared
jury experience. They would be all ages and ethnicities. They would be…a really
fun, caring, personable, did I mention fun, group of women to take to the
beach.
And finally, the characters started to arrive in my
head, and 12,000 words later, they’d been to the beach and taken the trip of
their lives. I had a ball hanging out with these women and writing their story.
It’s called Cabo San Loco.
Whew! I made deadline.
In hindsight, I realize that so often inspiration has
struck with small happenings that have nothing to do with the story theme. I
once overheard someone say, “It seemed like the most convenient place at the
time,” and ended up writing a whole story based inside a convenience store. When
struggling to fit a plot into a pets theme and walking through the little park
behind my condo, I saw a fallen tree with a hollowed end and suddenly
envisioned a pet rabbit escaping into the park and its owner following and
going right to the…well, you know. I wrote a four-story Christmas book once
based around the first stanza of “Santa Claus is Coming to Town,” which, as I
interpret it, is a song that has very little to do with murder. (Just thought
of two reasons why that’s wrong, so look for more feel-good Christmas stories.)
So, next time I need inspiration, I’m going to do
something completely unrelated. I’ll find it by taking a walk in a strange
neighborhood, listening to conversations at the grocery store, watching a
sitcom, or reading some random song
lyrics. I’ll add notes to my little notebook where I write down funny things
people say. But I’m keeping up with those ocean noises on Alexa. Turns out it’s
great writing background noise.
Surely lots of writers struggle with inspiration on
demand. I’d love to hear from some folks who’ve experienced this and how you
conquered it.
Murder on the Beach
comes out May 28 and is set for a pre-order price of 99 cents. My beachy
co-authors are Ritter Ames, Karen Cantwell, Lucy Carol, Barb Goffman, Shari
Randall, Shawn Reilly Simmons, and Cathy Wiley. (Turns out you can bond over a
shared writing experience, too.) The stories are all novelette length and set
at eight different beach locales.
Eleanor Cawood Jones ©2021
Eleanor Cawood Jones’ work appears in several mystery anthologies as well as two solo books, and she won a 2021 Derringer Award for "The Great Bedbug Incident and the Invitation of Doom" in Chesapeake Crimes: Invitation to Murder. She's an avid reader, people watcher, world traveler, and remodeling show addict who spends her spare time telling people how to pronounce Cawood (Kay'-wood) and making up long and elaborate story titles.
Love your meditation on deadlines. I'm not someone who can write a story on demand. My stories usually come from an experience that's been stuck in my head for days or years, and finally I understand how to use it. If I ever learn how to start a story from scratch with no idea demanding to be responded to, I'll be prolific. As it is, I struggle with each and every story idea.
ReplyDeleteDeadlines have always messed with me as well. My stories were always something in my life that stuck with me and finally came out.
ReplyDeleteI am trying to figure out how to move on and start being at least somewhat creative again.
There are so many demands on me these days that I too have a problem being inspired, especially with time limitations. But being invited to submit work is very encouraging I'm certain.
ReplyDeleteIt was big time for me back in the day.
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