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Sunday, June 07, 2026

Guest Post: The Inspiration Behind "Murder on Vacation" Wasn't Murder After All by Gerald Elias

 

Please welcome author Gerald Elias to the blog today. As I recently noted in a “Thursday Treats” post, Mr. Elias’ latest book is his short story collection. Published by White City Press, Murder on Vacation: Stories from the Case Files of Maury Gross, NYPD (Ret.), is available at the publisher, Amazon, and other vendors in digital and print formats.

 

Where does an author get ideas for a story? From personal experience? Deep contemplation? From a passing comment or casual glimpse? From other authors? Totally from out of the blue?

 

How about by accident?

 

Eight years ago, my wife and I stayed at a modest motel on the beach in the cozy coastal town of Cambria, California, in order to attend our niece’s ritzy wedding in wine country. During our stay, which lasted only a long weekend, three curious things popped out to me. (Maybe they were curious only to me because murder mysteries run in my blood.)

 

The first was an elderly couple strolling along the beach’s boardwalk. What was curious about that? Not that they were elderly—Who isn’t these days?—but that the gentleman in question was dressed in what his wife—who I imagined determined his attire–– probably considered appropriate for a California vacation: a 1950s style pair of Bermuda shorts and a gaudy Hawaiian shirt. And ankle-length, black socks—Don’t forget those—to round out the eye-catching ensemble.

 

The second curiosity was a state-of-the-art Porsche sportscar in the motel’s parking lot, which might have cost more than the motel itself.

 

The third and final item was the colony of dozens of elephant seals lolling on the beach about 10 miles north of us. In your mind’s eye, do not mistake an elephant seal for a sea lion. They’re twice as big, up to 4,000 nasty pounds, with a protruding proboscis which gives them their name. They only spend about a month per year out of the water, and you can imagine what they do while on shore leave, like most seafarers: rest, fight, and screw. And when they fight, it’s not for play. It’s for keeps: to become king of the hill or, more appropriately, king of the beach. Why? To win the dear damsel of choice, of course. Why else?

 

As my wife and I observed elephant seal festivities safely ensconced on a bluff with a chain link fence high above the beach, I got an idea to package curiosities one and two together with number three and write a short mystery. What emerged after a few days of resharpened pencils and crumpled paper was a draft of a story I initially called “Elephant Seals,” starring retired NYPD Police Chief Maury Gross and his wife Bobbi (the couple on the boardwalk).

 

I wrote this story only to amuse my wife and myself, with no further thoughts about where it might end up. But I really liked my two protagonists, and so did my wife, so on our next vacation I gathered more curiosities for a story. And the next. And the next…

 

Fifteen Maury Gross stories later, I had spanned the wonders of our great nation from sea to shining sea and decided they were worthy candidates for a collection. There is a great saga to be told how I ultimately found the perfect publisher in White City Press, but that’s another story in its entirety.

 

Suffice it to say that Maury Gross is the nicest, most unassuming and thoughtful cop you’d ever want to meet, and Bobbi is not only his longtime soulmate but also his astute partner in crime solving. And they’re both sharp as a tack.

 

The title of the first story, “Elephant Seals,” was changed to “Murder on Vacation” and, appropriately, is the name of the whole collection. If you’re looking for entertaining summer reading, here’s my advice: get an ice-cold beverage, a comfortable chair or lounge, a shady spot, and Murder on Vacation. As Maury would say, “What’s not to like?”  

 


 

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Gerald Elias ©2026

 

Silver Falchion finalist Gerald Elias can’t help writing about everything that interests him, from his Daniel Jacobus mystery series (and audiobooks) set in the dark corners of the classical music world, to his Western mystery, Roundtree Days. His short story collections, It’s a Crime! and Murder on Vacation (May, 2026, White City Press) cover everything from spies to sea elephants.

 

A former Boston Symphony musician, Elias is an internationally recognized violinist, conductor, and composer. He spends his free time enjoying the outdoors, travel, coffee, good food, and most of all, being a devoted grandpa. https://www.mysteriesandmusic.com/

Tuesday, May 12, 2026

John McMahon and his offer: YOUR NAME in my NEXT BOOK


Readers of this blog know that I am a big fan of John McMahon and his books. If things were not so grim here, I would do this in a heartbeat. As I can't, I asked Mr. McMahon if I could share the news here on my blog to help raise visibility of this very cool opportunity. He enthusiastically gave his support so the relevant part of his  latest newsletter, THE OFFER, is below.  Do it and help some folks and get the opportunity to be in the next book. And, if you have not read his books, get yourself to your favorite bookstore, library, or book selling portal. He writes great stuff!  His author website is here. 



YOUR NAME IN MY NEXT BOOK
Hi Friends,

This newsletter – I come to you with an offer. 

•    Would you like to see – YOUR NAME – as a character in my next book?
•    You could live on in immortality in print (and digital).

I was challenged to help raise money for some good causes.

•    Maybe your name is a judge killed under mysterious circumstances?  
•    Or you’re the Director of the NSA?   

Not sure if there will be a demand for this or not – but trying something new.
 
4 GREAT CAUSES & GROUND RULES
I have four charities that I have some connection to/passion for – and I’m looking to help them build donations.

So – ground rules:

1)    Donate $250 to one of four charities. I will match donations with my own $250. So together, we could raise $500 x 4 causes = $2,000.

2)    You get your name as a character in my next Gardner Camden/Patterns and Recognition book (coming out next Summer).

And if you already support good causes – you could just shift your focus this year – and support one of these. 

OK. Here are 4 great causes we would together support:

charity: water – building wells; ending the water crisis in the world; 100% of our donation goes directly to fund clean water projects. No admin cost.

St. Jude Hospital – amazing pediatric research hospital, focusing on children with cancer and leukemia.

San Diego Zoo Wildlife Alliance – non-profit parent company of the San Diego Zoo; their mission is simple- to save species worldwide. 


Cystic Fibrosis Foundation – supporting research to find a cure for CF and improve the lives of those living with it.
 
FINE PRINT
1)    You write the check to the charity - but get it to me. I’m going to deliver the checks, but it’s your tax deduction. And no past donations count. 

2)    I will make you sign an agreement about your name in the book so you don't sue anyone. Don’t worry. I will not make you a child predator. (I save that for critics of my books (Kidding :))

IF YOU’RE INTERESTED  – respond to this email – mcmahonjohn@att.net

Saturday, April 18, 2026

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Sunday, August 11, 2024

Guest Post: What’s in a Name? by Paula Messina

 

Please welcome back Paula Messina to the blog today…

 

 

                                                                               What’s in a Name? by Paula Messina

 

When someone asked why I’d dubbed the main character in the novel I’m writing Donatello Laguardia, I had an easy answer. That’s his name.

My answer isn’t a cheeky as it seems. I could not change his name now if I wanted to. Donatello Laguardia comes from a family that loves music, including opera. They’re avid readers of the comics, history, and mysteries. They’re also baseball fans. An Italian-speaking student of ancient history, Donatello makes a mean marinara sauce, decorates cakes in his father’s bakery, and solves murders.

Donatello’s last name is Laguardia because it’s his father’s, who inherited it from his father. In other words, it’s his roots, roots that go back to the 12th century. Guardia means guard. As the first born, Donatello is tormented because he did not protect his beloved brother and sister. In other words, he failed as a guard.

I learned pretty far into the novel why his parents named him Donatello. He is their gift from God. As torn and battered as Donatello is, he’s still their God-given gift.

I select my characters’ names carefully. I’m in what I hope are the final edits of the novel. If I were to change Donatello or Laguardia, I would need to go back to the beginning and do major rewrites. I don’t mean the old search and replace. I would have to change my character’s personality, his back story, his family tree. Any change would make him a different person.

Names define who we are, where we belong. They say where we and our ancestors come from. Without a name, we’re strangers, nothing more than “hey, you.” This is also true of the characters we create and read about.

Sherlock Holmes would be a different kind of genius if his name were Sherrington Hope, Arthur Conan Doyle’s first choice. Sherrington doesn’t begin to convey Sherlock’s energy, genius, and persistence. There’s something dynamic about Sherlock. Sherrington sounds like a man with a monocle in his right eye sitting in an overstuffed chair by the fireplace mumbling to himself. Sherrington would never rush toward danger. He’d hightail it in the opposite direction.

Ebeneezer Scrooge wouldn’t be “a squeezing, wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous, old sinner” if he had a different name. If Dickens, who is nonpareil in the name department, had named Ebeneezer Pete Bates, A Christmas Carol would have a different tightfisted misanthrope.

George Bailey by another name wouldn’t save his brother from drowning or marry Mary Hatch or keep Mr. Potter from turning Bedford Falls into Pottersville. Not even the angel Clarence could make someone with another name do those things in exactly the same way. George Bailey did them. No one else.

Names also place a character in time. The names Adelaide, Bathsheba, and Clara are more likely to appear in a 19th century novel than a twenty-first one. Whereas no one was named Nevaeh, heaven spelled backwards, two centuries ago. It became popular after a musician named his daughter Nevaeh in 2000. Then it sprouted like mushrooms after an autumn downpour. Nevaeh peaked around 2012, and has since fallen off in popularity.

Names can suggest setting. Zhang has Chinese origins just as Ben-Zion has Israeli ones. My novel is set in Boston’s North End during World War II when a large Italian and Italian-American population lived there. Mr. and Mrs. Laguardia are immigrants, and their children were born here.

To avoid confusion, I steer clear of names that look or sound alike, and I make sure no two characters’ names start with the same letter. For many readers, Dan and Dave sound the same. So do Sean and Juan or Jack Sprat and John Stat.

If a mystery has several characters with similar names or names beginning with the same letter, I’m convinced it’s a clue or red herring. When those names are not clues, I feel deceived and wonder why no one on the road to publication didn’t advise changes.

Nicknames can be used to great effect. Rock star Freddie Mercury and opera singer Montserrat Caballe, a star in her own right, sang Barcelona, the anthem for the 1992 Olympics in Spain. They went on to record an album. In an interview, Caballe instructed Freddie to call her Montse “because my very close friends say Montse to me.” This invitation to use her nickname defined their relationship.

Donatello doesn’t have a nickname. O’Toole, one of my secondary characters, insists on calling him Donnie. O’Toole rains Donnie down on Donatello every time they meet. We don’t use given names that much in conversation. If someone repeatedly says your name, it’s stifling and condescending. That person wants to dominate and belittle you. This is precisely why O’Toole refuses to say Donatello.

Names matter. I guess this puts me in opposition to William Shakespeare.

Romeo might smell as sweet if he had a different moniker, but he wouldn’t be the same person if he were Emerson or Frank or Waldo. And Juliet would be a different teenager if Shakespeare had named her Eve or Harriett or Natasha.

I won’t change Donatello Laguardia’s name. That’s who he is. Beside, he’s already threatened, “Don’t go messing with Donatello or Laguardia, or I’ll leave.”

I’d rather he stick around.

 

Paula Messina ©2024 

Paula Messina writes essays as well as humorous and historical fiction. “Fish Eyes” (Devil’s Snare: Best New England Crime Stories 2024) marks Donatello Laguardia’s print debut.

Tuesday, July 30, 2024

Sunday, July 21, 2024

Guest Post: A Study in Contrasts by Paul A. Barra


Please welcome back author Paul A Barra to the blog today…

 

A Study in Contrasts by Paul A. Barra

 

I admire contrast when authors have two important characters vying for prominence in a mystery novel. Otherwise, why have two? The contrast can vary from the natural complementarity between a man and a woman, working together as protagonists, to a good protagonist opposing an evil antagonist. Whether the contrast is inherently occurring or forced by circumstances, it is important to a story because it adds conflict—and conflict drives the plot, creating tension, the lifeblood of the genre.

 

Many of us write, and read, crime fiction precisely because a certain tension or suspense is a built-in part of the fictive type, pitting criminal activity against investigative efforts designed to end that activity. A person or persons unknown commits a crime, usually murder, early in the book and a good person or persons tries to identify the killer(s) and prevent more of his or her or their evil work. I need hardly mention here that “good” is a relative term when describing our protagonists. Victims are innocents (also speaking relatively), so there is also the satisfying result of justice served. Usually. No matter how intricate a writer’s plot or how well-crafted his characters, introducing a pair of contrasting good guys trying to solve the same mystery adds tension, and so adds interest.

 

When I was working to add such interest to my new thriller, SGT. FORD’S WIDOW, I searched for an opposite to my protagonist. Gil Ford is a rangy native of wild Wyoming who can ride a horse as well as he can drive a pickup. I wanted him to be a veteran of the Vietnam War because I think the Modern-Historical Mystery is the wave of the future in the genre as readers tire of the ubiquitous cell phone playing the role of an electronic version of deus ex machina, or forcing the writer to invent unlikely reasons for a character to be unable to use his or her cell. I say unlikely because we know most people today would rather leave home without their shirts than without their phones. A charged cell is as important to a detective as a loaded sidearm. Cell phone towers have proliferated today to such an extent that Statista, a statistical research company, estimates that there are 16 billion (that’s sixteen thousand million or 16 x 109) mobile phones in the world today—a world of just less than 8 billion human inhabitants. A garbage picker in Bangladesh can now call after work to see if his wife needs anything from Walmart on his way home. Well, maybe not Walmart.

 

What I needed was a person to work with Ford who was small, had never known winter, had never seen a horse or a cow, and who spoke no English. Enter Tran Thi Linh, the wife of a Viet Cong guerilla who died trying to infiltrate Ford’s army base. Ford was an MP then, and he rescued Linh from incensed GIs taking out their anger on her for the damage done by her late husband. As she recovers after in an army field hospital, she realizes Ford saved her very life and she decides she must dedicate the rest of that life to repaying him for his kindness. For his part, Ford realizes Linh will not survive on her own in the war-torn Mekong delta. She is broken, scarred and ostracized by the villagers who hate the grief her husband’s actions brought to them. Ford must get her to his home in Wyoming. It’s 1967. The trouble is, home is 8,000 miles away and American officials, not happy by then with how the war is going, will not transport the family of a VC to the World, as American conscripts referred to the USA. Ford works out an ingenious deal with an officer on a South Vietnamese gunboat, and Linh gets to Guam. And then to California on a plane with other wounded people.


The main part of the book takes place in eastern Wyoming, where Linh is convinced that no living thing can survive outside in January, and where Ford returns to work as a P.I. She accommodates to the weather, and to the large, hairy people, the amounts of protein they consume regularly, and the primitive language they speak. Women in Wyoming shoot guns and smoke cigarettes, she discovers to her horror. But she overcomes all the divergences from her former life and helps Ford solve the theft of six pigeon-blood-red rubies and subsequent murders. Linh eventually becomes locally famous as a crime-buster. She bows to her neighbors, and they bow back. Ford bows to no one. They are the perfect pair—if you like contrast between protagonists—except that Linh can no longer tolerate any sexual contact. That produces yet another contrast to chew over as you read.

 


Paul A. Barra’s new mystery-thriller, SGT. FORD’S WIDOW, will be released by the venerable publishing house The Permanent Press on Oct. 1, 2024. He invites you to kindly check out his website for more information (www.paulbarra.com).


 

Paul A. Barra ©2024

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