Showing posts with label serial killer. Show all posts
Showing posts with label serial killer. Show all posts

Friday, April 03, 2026

Review: Two Truths and a Lie: A Thriller by Mark Stevens

 

Two Truths and a Lie: A Thriller by Mark Stevens is the second book in the series that began with No Lie Lasts Forever. Billed as a sequel, it is in some senses. In others, it is more a continuation of the first book as those events are predominant through the entirety of this book. Therefore, while I am trying to minimize spoilers, some are present in this review. Suffice it to say, if you continue reading about this very good book, don’t blame the reviewer.

 

As the book begins, the trial of Harry Kugel is underway. Harry Kugel was the man known locally as the “PDQ” killer. He had killed several times decades earlier and then went dark for many years. His ego brought him down as recent murders had been reminiscent of his work. He did not like the fact that somebody was taking credit now off of his legacy. He wanted the imposter gone. So, he reached out to TV Reporter Flynn Martin who is a bit of a legend, for good and bad reasons, in Denver. Ultimately, she survived, and the man who put her and others through hell was identified and exposed by her reporting. A little over a year later, he has finally been convicted for what he has done and was sentenced to three consecutive life terms.

 

Seconds before he is taken off to jail and then to prison from the courtroom, he turns to her and promises that nothing is over.

 

Several months later, long after she and her son, Wyatt, moved to a more secure home high in a Denver tower, and just when she finally feels like things are going back to a quasi-normal, the terror of being stalked and a target begins again. It has been a long day in the field with camera operator and good friend, Tamica Porter, as she sits and goes through paperwork her teen son brought home from school. Amidst the normal stuff is a sealed envelope that scares her at the sight of it. She’s moved and taken drastic measures for privacy. All that seems to have been for naught as she opens the envelope and finds a single white sheet of paper.

 

That single white sheet of paper is full of cryptic sentences very reminiscent what PDQ used to send her. But, he is in prison, so he can’t be terrorizing her again this way. Or could he? Does the prison even look at anything he mails out? Or did he have an unknown accomplice? Or is it one of his cult members drawn to act by the extensive media coverage of the trial and her role in his capture? Or is it some whack job looking to impress PDQ? These questions and others terrorize her as it is clear that somebody got close enough to her son to send a message.

 

A message that scares her in every fiber of her being, while at the same time, intrigues and pulls her into another very high-profile story. A story that could easily get her and others killed. Which could also be said about some of the other stories she is soon working on, including the disappearance of a local family of four.

 

Two Truths and a Lie: A Thriller by Mark Stevens again takes readers to Denver, the world of journalism, and the debate over which stories and which victims get media coverage. Published by Thomas & Mercer, this read is another good one in the series and a bit more intense than No Lie Lasts Forever. This read builds on that book extensively and keeps the momentum going as it very clearly sets up a third book in the series.

 

Both books are strongly recommended as is reading them in order. Not only are the stories in the reads strong, but one is also given plenty to think about regarding actual journalism, the media, and what goes on these days.

  


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By the way, The Poisoned Pen Bookstore has a recent interview with author Mark Stevens where he discusses the book. The program is on YouTube here.

 

 

My digital ARC reading copy came by way of the publisher, Thomas & Mercer, through NetGalley, with no expectation of a positive review. 

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2026

Tuesday, September 30, 2025

Publication Day Review: The Girl from Devil’s Lake: A Brady Novel of Suspense by J. A. Jance

 

The Girl from Devil’s Lake: A Brady Novel of Suspense by J. A. Jance is one of those books where the reader knows the identity of the killer almost from the beginning. This is done by way of alternating chapters from the killer’s point of view. The book opens in Fertile, Minnesota, in 1956 where a child hears voices in his head and eventually kills. That prologue is followed by numerous chapters detailing the point of view of the killer that strikes again and again. Eventually, the killer relocates to Bisbee, Arizona, and continues his work, undetected, while becoming a pillar of the local community in a variety of ways.

 

The same Bisbee, Arizona, where in the time of the main storyline, November 2023, Sheriff Joanna Brady just recently won reelection. Her department is under intense strain due to the political climate, things at the border, jail over population, being short staffed, and other factors. Her tenure as the Sheriff for the Cochise County Sheriff’s Department will continue. As a result, her daughter, Jenny, who is about to graduate from the Arizona Police Officer Academy, will be accepting a job to go to work in Pima County. Sheriff Brady not only will be in attendance at graduation to see Jenny graduate, Sheriff Brady will be giving the main graduation speech. So, it is a big event for all involved.

 

A lot of things have changed since Sheriff Brady graduated decades ago after her first election in the wake of her first husband’s death, but hazing and sexism is still a huge problem. While noting that and calling it out, she also notes in her speech the fact that in the decades since she graduated, the world of law enforcement has gotten darker and more violent. That the border, drug trafficking human smuggling, and the cartels are just a few of the reasons that things are more difficult and dangerous now that they were when she first started out. Now she not only has to worry about her safety and the safety of those under her command she also, like any other parent, has to worry about her daughter as she takes her first real job in law enforcement.

 

A few days later, just after Thanksgiving, as the rain pours down on Bisbee and the surrounding area, Sheriff Brady gets a call that pulls her away from the family and their delayed Thanksgiving celebration. Floods are happening and her people are on it and handling everything well. But, a highway worker trying to clear debris from a local bridge so that the flood waters could move through unimpeded has found a duffle bag wedged in a debris pile. Inside that bag was the body of a young child.

 

The waters of the San Pedro River originate somewhere in Mexico before crossing the border and making their way to the bridge near St. David. So, though the body was recovered here, the young boy probably came from Mexico. She knows Captain Arturo Peña, head of the Federales unit in Naco, Sonora, really well and has worked with him many times. That will come in hand as the case is complicated and crosses both sides of the border.

 

It is also the first death in the here and now of the main storyline as the walls begin to close in on a local serial killer who has killed for decades.

 

The Girl from Devil’s Lake: A Brady Novel of Suspense by J. A. Jance is marketed as the 21st book in this long running series. As such, it does not break any new ground with these long-established characters. Not that it was expected as that would be out of form for the series and this author.

 

As a reader, I personally find chapters from the point of view of the nutjob killer, in this case one who has gotten away with it for decades, tedious and completely unnecessary. In my opinion, it is clichéd writing that almost does nothing expect pad word and page counts. However, it must work for many readers as authors continue to write it and publishers release books with it right and left. So, if you like it, you will be happy here as there is a lot of it.

 

Overall, despite the caveats mentioned above, The Girl from Devil’s Lake: A Brady Novel of Suspense by J. A. Jance, is a good read and worth your time. If you are new to the series, you could easily start here as previous events are only touched on briefly if mentioned at all.

 

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My reading copy came from the publisher, William Morrow, through NetGalley, and with no expectation of a review.

 

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2025

Friday, August 22, 2025

Friday's Forgotten Book: At What Cost: A Detective Penley Mystery by James L’Etoile


A serial killer is active in At What Cost: A Detective Penley Mystery by James L’Etoile. Not just your average run of the mill serial killer either as West Sacramento Police Detective John Penley and his partner, Detective Paula Newberry, have discovered. They already knew a killer was dumping bodies and those bodies were found missing organs. The latest victim, a well-known gang member going back many years, and a guy who did a lot of horrible stuff in his past regardless of what he was doing in the here and now, is missing his head and his limbs. His extremely distinctive tattoo on his chest made what is left of him easy to identify.

 

Evidence leads them to believe more and more that the killer is also a collector. They think he is collecting body parts from the kills. In a way, he is. In another way, he is a harvester. He, somehow, is aware of the needs of patients on the national transplant list. He is harvesting organs to fill those needs and others on the black market.

 

He soon makes it very clear that he knows Penley’s son is on the transplant list for a kidney and the need is critical. His disease progression is such that the window for his son to survive the surgery is closing a little each day. The killer makes it very clear that he can get a kidney for Penley’s son, but it is going to cost in many different ways.

 

What follows is a complex and often disturbingly intense police procedural. For those of us who have been through the transplant process, the read can be a bit much at times. While it is all fiction, one wonders just how strong are the safeguards to prevent what happens in the read.

 

At What Cost: A Detective Penley Mystery by James L’Etoile is the first book of this police procedural series. Published in 2016 by Crooked Lane Books, the read is just as powerful and relevant today.


Strongly Recommended.

 

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My hardback reading copy came from the Central, or Downtown Branch, of the Dallas Public Library System. Book two of the series, Bury the Past, is on hold for me at the library.

 

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2025

Thursday, May 15, 2025

Review: No Lie Lasts Forever: A Thriller by Mark Stevens

  

Mark Steven’s last book, The Fireballer, was a very good book. It was very good, even though he did not have my team, the Texas Rangers, present in the read that much and even had the wrong team winning the World Series. That book touched on many things, not just baseball, and like his Allison Coil Mystery series, was a mighty good read. So, when Mark Sevens let me know he had a new book coming out and offered me a reading copy, even though with my worsening health and everything else here I had no idea if I would ever get to read it, I eventually accepted the offer.


No Lie Lasts Forever: A Thriller takes readers to Denver in a complicated tale of mystery, murder, treachery, and a lot more. Reporter Flynn Martin, a television icon, is our heroine. Her dad was a legendary newspaper reporter in Denver and the proverbial apple fell right at the base of that tree. It is supposed to be her day off as the book opens.

 

But, her boss has reached out as a gunman is holding hostages and wants a television reporter to be a go between for him and the police. Flynn was not his choice, but she is available, and he will accept her as the go between, if she agrees. Even though these days she is more known for her projects on climate change and think pieces, she has a long history on the police beat and has many contacts.

 

Grudgingly, with lives at stake, she gets involved only to have things go horribly wrong through no fault of her own. In the violent and deadly aftermath, she takes a lot of heat internally and publicly from the police and average folks who have an opinion, shaped by the storm of media coverage at rival networks and elsewhere, of what she did that fateful day. Suspended and flooded with grief, she would like to be left alone to cope with what has happened.

 

Instead, a long dormant serial killer decides he is going to involve her in his quest to set the record straight. He wants credit for the three successful, as he sees it, kills he got away with many years ago and how he has behaved since. He does not want anyone placing a murder he did not commit on him. PDQ was a legend in Denver and some believe he is back killing again. He isn’t and wants his legend intact and not desecrated by an imposter. He is very mad about somebody doing a very poor job of copying him and wants Flynn to prove it wasn’t him. She is supposed to do that without involving anyone else whether it be coworkers, family, or the police.

 

While the initial goal of preserving his legacy might have been achievable, his ego drives him, as it does Flynn, and numerous other people in this read. Mistakes and assumptions are made and things quite rapidly escalate for everyone. A violent collision was and is inviable with its own rippling aftermath.

 

No Lie Lasts Forever: A Thriller by Mark Stevens is one heck of a read. Multifaceted and moving forward at a rapid pace, Flynn finds herself deeper and deeper into a nightmare. It also reinforces my long held personal belief that leaving the house is often a very bad idea in many more ways than one. 


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My print ARC was provided by the author with no expectation of a review. As it happens, the read was selected for the Amazon First Reads this month. That means, until the end of the month, the digital version of the read is free for Amazon Prime members, and $1.99 for other readers. Published by Thomas & Mercer, the book comes out on June 1st.

 

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2025

Tuesday, September 19, 2023

Review: Blessing of the Lost Girls: A Brady and Walker Family Novel by J. A. Jance


Blessing of the Lost Girls: A Brady and Walker Family Novel by J. A. Jance is an engrossing read currently scheduled to be published on September 19th.  One should make sure to read both of the afterwords as they are very important to the context of the story.

Readers are first introduced to Charlie Milton and it is clear very soon that he is a really bad guy. One of those guys that neighbors always say afterwards during media interviews that the guy was odd and just didn’t fit in right with other folks.

It is February 2019 as the book begins and Charlie Milton is in town for the Tucson Rodeo. Charlie Milton is a serial killer. He likes to hunt for the right victim. He has a type. He prefers women of color, especially those from Indian reservations. He counts on law enforcement arguing over which agency should handle the missing person case which means the case went cold long before it ever started. That works well for serial killers like Charlie Milton. Once he has killed, he soon hits the road in his RF and drifts to the next place.

What he didn’t count on was that fact that DNA from a kill he did several years ago would make its way into the system in 2022. It did. Field Officer Dan Pardee works for a new federal agency, Missing and Murdered Indigenous People’s Task Force. Known as “MIP,” they are part of the Department of The Interior. Their mission is to work cases involving the disappearances and deaths of Native Americans.

Dan Pardee, an investigator with a background in Border Patrol, is assigned the case of Rosa Rios. With the DNA match, it makes it clear to everyone that it was her charred body was found three years ago on a rancher’s land in the jurisdiction of Sheriff Joanna Brady of Cochise County. He is going to work the case. He will need Sheriff’s Brady’s help in bringing justice and, hopefully, a little peace to her family.

What follows is a complicated read. Dan Pardee is the focus, but Brady and her family make a number of appearances in this very enjoyable read. A tale that also, in addition to providing a complicated and enjoyable mystery, brings attention to what has been going on for decades for missing indigenous women. Complicated and fast moving, Blessing of the Lost Girls: A Brady and Walker Family Novel by J. A. Jance is well worth your time and attention.


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My reading copy came by way of a NetGalley ARC with no expectation of a review.

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2023

Saturday, April 14, 2018

HISTORY’S RICH WITH MYSTERIES: DEAN CORLL -- Houston’s “Candy Man” Mass Murders by Earl Staggs

It has been quite some time since Earl has been around with one of his “History’s Rich With Mysteries” guest posts. He is back today with a case that caused my parents great angst and resulted in a lot of school seminars warning about strangers when I was in elementary school during this time period.



HISTORY’S RICH WITH MYSTERIES


When I look at the past, I find stories about people which fascinate me, particularly those in which there is a curious mixture of fact, legend, and mysterious uncertainty. In this series of articles, I want to explore some of those stories. I think of them as mysteries swaddled in legend. While truth is always desired in most things, truth easily becomes staid and boring. Legend, on the other hand, forever holds a hint of romanticism and an aura of excitement borne of adventure, imagination and, of course, mystery.


DEAN CORLL -- Houston’s “Candy Man” Mass Murders

by Earl Staggs

At the time, it was the worst example of serial killings in US  history.  Although the actual number of victims may never be known, Dean Corll and two teenage companions killed at least 29 boys in the Houston, Texas, area between September 1970 and August 1973. The victims were raped, horrifically tortured and mutilated, then either strangled, shot, or both.

Dean Arnold Corll was born on December 24, 1939, in Fort WayneIndiana.  He was considered shy, timid, and a loner who seldom socialized with other children.  His parents divorced in 1946, were remarried  in 1950, and divorced again in 1953.
  

Dean's mother married another man, and the family settled in the Houston area. She divorced her new husband in 1963.  Soon after her divorce, she established the Corll Candy Company, specializing in making and selling pecan treats. Dean was  vice-president of the family firm. A teenage male employee of the company accused him of making sexual advances.  Dean's mother's response was to fire the accuser.  

In August of 1964, Dean, at age 24, was drafted into the US Army.  He hated military service and after ten months,  applied for and received a family hardship discharge claiming the family business needed him.  After returning home, Dean told close acquaintances that while in the Army, he had homosexual experiences for the first time.

Dean developed a practice of giving candy to young boys and became known as the “Candy Man.” Twelve-year-old David Brooks was one of the many boys who received free candy. He became a close companion who accompanied Dean on business trips. Before long, their relationship became a sexual one.


On September 25, 1970, Dean, with David’s help, claimed his first known murder victim, an eighteen- year-old college student. He was strangled, covered in lime, wrapped in plastic, and buried under a large boulder in a beach area. Years later, David led police to the burial site. His body was naked and his hands and feet were bound, which led forensic investigators to surmise he had been sexually violated.

David’s primary role became finding victims and enticing them with candy and invitations to a party. Some were friends of his and some were new acquaintances he happened to meet.  Dean paid him two hundred dollars for each one.  The victims were driven to Dean’s house where they were subdued by drugs, alcohol, or simply by force, stripped naked, tied to a bed or a plywood board, then sexually assaulted and tortured before being strangled or shot to death.  Their bodies were wrapped in plastic sheeting and buried in several different areas.

In 1971, David brought fifteen-year-old Elmer Wayne Henley, Jr. to Dean’s home as a potential victim. Instead, Dean thought Elmer would be a good addition to his “team” and offered him the same two hundred dollar payment David was getting for each boy he brought in.   Elmer resisted for a while, but in early 1972, accepted the offer because his family needed the money.  


The team was now in place, and the threesome lured a steady stream of teenage boys, one or two at time, into their decadent and deadly circle. Some of their victims were forced by Dean to write or phone their parents with excuses for being away from home for a while.

In one incident, two boys were tied to the torture board and told to fight until one was killed. Dean told them the survivor would be set free.  After the two boys beat each other for hours, however, Dean raped, tortured, and killed them both.

THE DEATH OF DEAN CORLL

On August 8, 1973, Elmer Henley showed up at Dean's house with nineteen-year-old Timothy Kerley and a fifteen-year-old girl named Rhonda Williams. David Brooks was not there. Dean was furious and said Elmer had ruined everything by bringing a girl. Elmer explained that Rhonda was a friend of his who had been beaten by her father and did not want to go home. Dean seemed to calm down, and the group began to drink beer, smoke marijuana and sniff glue until they passed out.

Elmer awoke later to find that Dean had bound and gagged him as well as Rhonda and Timothy. Dean eventually ungagged Elmer and said he was going to kill them all. He held a gun on Elmer and threatened to shoot him. Elmer pleaded for his life and promised to help torture and kill the other two. Dean unbound him, then tied Timothy and Rhonda to the torture board. Elmer grabbed Dean's gun and shouted, "You've gone far enough, Dean! I can't go on any longer! I can't have you kill all my friends!" Dean didn't believe Elmer would shoot him and advanced toward him. Elmer shot him a total of six times. Dean Arnold Corll was dead at the age of thirty-three.

Elmer called the police and said, "Y'all better come here right now. I just killed a man." He, Timothy, and Rhonda waited on the porch for the police to arrive. While they waited, Elmer told Timothy, "I could have gotten $200 for you."

THE TRIALS

Elmer was indicted for 6 murders. The killing of Dean Corll was ruled self-defense, so he was not charged for that one. David Brooks was charged with 4 counts of murder. Elmer and David assisted police in recovering bodies of their victims, most of whom had been buried in a boat shed in Southwest Houston owned by the Corll family, at High Island Beach, and at Lake Sam Houston. The bodies recovered showed evidence of torture as well as sexual violation and mutilation.

The 28 victims officially attributed to Dean Corll and his teen associates at the time (Increased to 29 when another victim was identified in 1983.) was the worst case of mass serial killing on record in the US until John Wayne Gacy was charged with murdering 33 young men and boys in 1978. Gacy admitted he had been influenced by Dean Corll.

District Attorney Carol Vance called the case the "most extreme example of man's inhumanity to man I have ever seen.”

After jury deliberation of only 92 minutes, Elmer Henley, now 17, was found guilty of all charges and received 6 consecutive 99-year sentences, a total of 594 years. He appealed and was granted a retrial in 1978. He was again found guilty on all counts and received the same sentence.

David Brooks was brought to trial on February 27, 1975. He had been indicted for 4 murders but was tried for only one. The trial lasted less than a week. After 90 minutes of deliberation, he was found guilty and sentenced to life in prison. An appeal was dismissed in 1979.

Elmer Henley and David Brooks are currently serving their sentences in Texas prisons. Both have been denied parole multiple times over the years. Elmer Wayne Henley has a Facebook page, and a 2015 interview with him is available at https://tinyurl.com/yc8azdqc

While the official number of Dean Corll's victim is set at 29, there may have been more. More than 40 boys went missing in the Houston area between 1970 and 1973 when Dean and his accomplices were active. The Houston police was criticized for not aggressively searching for more bodies.

There was also evidence Dean had other victims prior to 1970.  Former employees of the Corll Candy Company recalled seeing Dean digging holes on company property and cementing over them several years before. They also reported he kept a supply of plastic sheeting and nylon cord similar to what he used on victims later on. After the Corll Candy Company closed, Dean went to work for the Houston Lighting and Power Company. His coworkers there also remembered him keeping a supply of those materials on hand.

THE BIGGEST MYSTERY

I'll never understand how someone like Dean Corll can exist. How is it possible that a human being can inflict extreme torture, pain, and suffering upon other human beings up to and including their death with no more thought or emotion than to wonder where the next victim will be found? Are we not all born with an inate respect and concern not only for the rights of others but for their very lives? Aren't the abilities to feel guilt and remorse as much a part of our make up as the needs to eat and sleep? There must be something about serial killers and mass murderers that is different from the rest of us. Perhaps further development and research into DNA will expose a common thread among people like Dean Corll, John Wayne Gacy, Ted Bundy, Gary Ridgway and others. Perhaps even a cure.




Earl Staggs ©2018


Earl Staggs earned all Five Star reviews for his novels MEMORY OF A MURDER and JUSTIFIED ACTION and has twice received a Derringer Award for Best Short Story of the Year. He served as Managing Editor of Futures Mysterious Anthology Magazine, as President of the Short Mystery Fiction Society, and is a frequent speaker at conferences and seminars. He invites any comments via email at earlstaggs@sbcglobal.net

He also invites you to visit his blog site at https://earlwstaggs.wordpress.com/ to learn more about his novels and stories.

Friday, September 02, 2016

FFB Review: I, ALEX CROSS (2009) by James Patterson (Reviewed by Barry Ergang)

September… football is back, the weather should be cooling off, and Halloween candy is on the shelves already. Barry kicks off things here for this first Friday in September with his review of the 2009 release by James Patterson of I, ALEX CROSS. Make sure you check out the full list over at Patti’s blog and don’t forget to read her novel, The Concrete Angel.



I, ALEX CROSS (2009) by James Patterson

Reviewed by Barry Ergang


This is supposed to be a review of James Patterson’s novel I, Alex Cross, but it’s going to take into account some peripheral but not unrelated factors, so bear with me, skip, skim, or simply stop reading now.

I read this novel because I have a number of friends who are hardcore James Patterson fans. Because of their enthusiasm and dedication, several years ago I tried to read one of the novels in his Women’s Murder Club series. After five or six chapters I gave up. It seemed to be clearly yet another in what has been a deluge over many years of deranged serial killer stories, too many of which pander to some readers’ cravings for mindless sensationalism but otherwise offer no psychological insights into these characters and why they behave as they do.

When I told one of my friends about this, omitting the editorial about pandering, she said to forget the Women’s Murder Club and read an Alex Cross novel instead. Having seen the two movies starring Morgan Freeman as Cross and thinking they were just okay for what they were but far from stellar, I obtained an e-book edition of I, Alex Cross.

With regard to James Patterson, I must in all honesty point out that I have a problem with this man and his—as the Wall Street Journal referred to it in a couple of articles—publishing empire. Said empire means the release of a considerable number of books annually, the majority of which seem to be co-authored. According to the WSJ, Patterson outlines the stories, after which his collaborators write them and send him their efforts. He, in turn, either revises portions of or completely rewrites them. The books appear with covers featuring his name in huge fonts and his co-authors’ in much smaller ones. I can never help wondering if in most cases the co-authors didn’t do the bulk of the work for which Patterson gets the lion’s share of credit.

Although Patterson seems to have written the Alex Cross series without collaborators, I have to point out to Patterson fans that British author John Creasey, who is best remembered for a number of mystery series but who also wrote in other genres, produced in his lifetime—see for verification the John Creasey entry on Wikipedia and the book Murder Ink by Dilys Winn—more than five or six hundred books that he wrote entirely by himself!

On to I, Alex Cross, which being the sixteenth book in the series, is not the one to start with, as I soon discovered, since I had no idea of the back stories of Cross and other series regulars.

When the grisly remains are discovered of Caroline Cross, niece of Alex Cross, detective in the Washington, D.C. Metropolitan Police Department, and it subsequently becomes apparent that she is but one of many victims of a particularly kinky and callous killer, Cross dives into the investigation with an irrepressible determination to find the party responsible. His probing intersects and sometimes interferes with that of the FBI and the Secret Service, while simultaneously he must contend—and quite emotionally—with the potentially fatal illness of his elderly grandmother, with whom he, two of his three children, and his girlfriend Bree live.

The storyline involves an expensive and exclusive mob-owned brothel called Blacksmith Farms run by Tony Nicholson, which caters to the wealthy, famous, and powerful. Apart from potentially embarrassing—and destroying the reputations of—senators and members of Congress, both male and female, revelations about Nicholson’s clientele might also spotlight members of  President Vance’s Cabinet and  threaten the security and equanimity of the administration. Thus, the situation must be dealt with by the federal agencies.

Nicholson’s operation code-names its clients, one of whom is the killer known as Zeus. Zeus, whoever he actually is, is among those people powerful enough to prevent disclosure of his true identity. You may rest assured that he’s a deranged serial killer whose motivations are not delved into insightfully—this despite the fact that, according to “biographical information” on Patterson’s website, Alex Cross has a Ph.D in Psychology, with focuses on abnormal and forensic psychology. (http://www.jamespatterson.com/alex-cross#.V79i2qLVN9M)

Despite a poorly formatted and proofread e-book edition, I found the story to be an  almost irresistible page-turner—the key word there being almost—despite generally lame and sometimes clichéd prose, and very superficial (and often-clichéd) characterizations. Patterson is fond of short chapters in fast-moving novels. This one contains 117 chapters. (Yes, you read that correctly: 117.) The problem is, the revelation of Zeus’s identity is a complete and utter cheat. That killed the novel for me and made it a thoroughgoing disappointment—not to mention an irritating and aggravating one.

Years ago, a very successful fiction writer taught me the valuable lesson that in spite of life’s tendency to throw us unforeseeable surprises from left field, competent fiction is not allowed to. It must allude, however subtly, to the surprise or twist ending lest the reader feel cheated. In other words, the reader should be able to say, “If I’d spotted and paid attention to that moment, I’d have seen the finish/surprise coming.” Patterson doesn’t reveal Zeus’s identity until chapter 108 of 117 chapters, and the character is not someone the reader has encountered earlier except in the guise of Zeus. Having the “least likely suspect” in a mystery novel turn out to be the villain is a long-established and perfectly acceptable tradition, but the author has to play fair with the reader by introducing the suspect early on and having him or her appear in places throughout the story along with the other, more likely suspects. Patterson doesn’t. He introduces and then reveals his villain’s true identity when the story is nearly over.

Will I be reading any other Patterson titles in the future? There’s no way of knowing definitively, but I wouldn’t bet money on it. There are too many better constructed and written mysteries and thrillers available as superior alternatives.



© 2016 Barry Ergang

Derringer Award-winner Barry Ergang’s work has appeared in a multitude of publications, print and electronic. You can find some of it in a variety of genres in e-book formats at Amazon and Smashwords.