Showing posts with label rescue. Show all posts
Showing posts with label rescue. Show all posts

Sunday, April 02, 2017

Revisiting A Sample Sunday Excerpt from "RESCUE" by Earl Staggs

Three years ago today Earl Staggs provided the excerpt below for his new story, Rescue. It  ties into his novel Justified Action that he shared back in February 2014  here. Both books are good ones and well worth your time. I don't know if I am responsible for the naming of one of the characters. i do know Earl likes to boss me around. If Earl IS Tall Chambers then it follows....

In my novel JUSTIFIED ACTION, I introduced Tall Chambers.  After a twenty-year career in Army Special Forces, Tall joins a secretive agency which tracks terrorist groups and stops them before innocent people are harmed.  Tall puts all that aside, however, when someone close to him is murdered.  After that, he devotes his wits and weapons to finding the killer.
After JUSTIFIED ACTION was published (and received great reviews, I might add) I decided to write a short story featuring Tall and his team.  I called the story RESCUE, and it picks up after the novel with Tall’s team of professionals on a mission in the Middle East.
It turned out to be a long short story, coming in at just under 9,500 words.  That’s why I did something different and called it a “Mini Novel.”
This is the beginning of the first chapter of RESCUE.




RESCUE
A Mini Novel in Five Chapters
featuring Tall Chambers

by Earl Staggs



CHAPTER ONE


Alongside a dirt road twenty miles east of Abu Dhabi, capital city of the United Arab Emirates, Tall Chambers crouched behind a boulder the size of a jeep. On his left, Mountain Brown rested on his knees. For a man who stood six-eight and carried well over three hundred pounds of tight muscle, that was as close to a crouch as he could get.
On Tall’s right, crouching easily six feet away, Airman First Class Kevin Mason shielded his eyes with an open hand and looked up at the blazing sun. “Sure is hot,” he said.
“Shouldn’t be much longer,” Tall said.
“You’re in a desert, boy,” Mountain grumbled. “It’s the middle of August and it’s only ten o’clock in the morning. By noon, it’ll hit a hundred and ten. If you can’t take the heat, get an office job.”
Tall grinned. Mountain liked to push buttons. Anyone’s.
“I can take the heat,” Kevin shot back. “Don’t worry about me, old timer.”
Tall liked it that Kevin stood up to the big man. Kevin was well-built and obviously worked out to stay that way, but was maybe five-eight with boots on and weighed one-sixty at most. Mountain could twist him into a pretzel without breaking a sweat. The kid had spunk.
Mountain leaned toward Tall and spoke in a low voice. “Who is that boy and what’s he doing here?”
“Our usual interpreter wasn’t available. The Air Force loaned him to us.”
“I know we need somebody speaks the language, but Christ! What is he, twelve?”
Tall chuckled. “He’s twenty-five, not as young as he looks.”
“Well, I feel a lot safer knowing I have a baby-faced interpreter watching my back. Does he know how to use that rifle he’s holding?”
“I looked over his records. He’s a qualified marksman, and he’s had some experience in recon ops.”
“Does he have any idea why we’re here?”
“No, I haven’t had time to read him in. I need to do that.”
Mountain raised his M-16 rifle and checked it again to make sure it was ready. “Okay, as long as I don’t have to babysit him.”
“He’ll be fine.” Tall lifted his binoculars and looked back down the road to his left. Thin swirling dust devils rose from the parched sandy soil and dissipated into gassy heat vapors. He felt like it was already a hundred and ten degrees.
He saw nothing coming and turned his attention to the other side of the road. He couldn’t see them, but he knew four more of his operatives were there, hiding behind boulders and squatty bushes dotting the flat desert landscape. Ben Goldman was one of the ops. Ben would set off the small explosive device buried in the road when Tall gave the signal.
Tall scooted over next to the Airman. “Kevin, just so you know what we’re doing here, a bus will be coming down this road any minute. On board is a group of armed Muslim terrorists on their way to a street festival in downtown Abu Dhabi. There’ll be a big crowd, many of them tourists and American service personnel. These people plan to mingle with the crowd, open fire, and kill as many as they can. Our plan is to stop them right here to make sure that doesn’t happen.”
“So we’re going to stop the bus and take them prisoner?”
Tall raised his binoculars again. “That’s up to them. We’ll give them a chance to surrender, and we hope they do. We want to take them in for interrogation. Some local politicians are supporting the group, and we want to find out who they are. But sometimes, these people choose to die for their cause. If that’s what they want, we’ll accommodate them.” He lowered the binoculars. “They’re coming. About a half mile away.”
Tall keyed his headset mic. “Get ready, Ben.”
“I see them,” Ben Goldman responded. “Let’s rock ‘n roll, Tall man.”
Tall turned back to Kevin. “When the bus stops, I want you to tell them in Arabic to put down their weapons and raise their hands in the air. Tell them if they don’t, we’ll open fire. Got it?”
“Got it.”
“Good. Then I want you to level your rifle on the bus driver. If he tries to move the vehicle or shows a weapon, shoot him.”
Kevin stared at him for a moment as if shocked he might be involved in a gunfight. He licked his dry lips and raised his rifle into firing position across the boulder. “Copy that, sir.”
A minute later, the bus, no more than an ancient flatbed truck with bench seats, two slat rails for sides and a ragged canvas roof, drew within thirty yards of where Tall and his team waited. Tall guessed about twenty of them on board, scattered throughout a vehicle large enough for twice as many. They wore Western clothing instead of traditional Arab outfits. To fit in with the festival crowd, he guessed, and he saw four women mixed in with them.
Tall keyed his mic and said, “Do it, Ben.”
No more than a second passed before an explosion ripped the still desert air and a wide geyser of dust and gravel spewed upward from the road in front of the bus. The driver pulled to a shrieking, sliding stop just short of the spot where Tall stood behind the boulder. Mountain Brown stepped sideways down the length of the vehicle with his weapon in firing position and stopped at the rear corner. Ben Goldman and three other operatives took up positions along the other side.
Kevin shouted what Tall had instructed him to say.
One of the women on the bus vaulted over the side rail and landed on the ground. She wore a black tee shirt and black pants and her dark hair frizzled in all directions. Her mouth was pulled into a tight line and her eyes flashed with rage. In her hand, she held a hunting knife with an eight-inch blade.
“Infidels!” she shouted with a thick accent. “I kill all you Yankee pigs!”
Ben Goldman moved to the front of the bus. He said and did nothing, but waited with the others to see what she would do next.
She moved toward Ben and tossed the knife back and forth from one hand to the other. “Come get me, American man. Come see how I slice you like melon. What’s your matter, dog shit bastard? You left your balls home with your momma?”
Tall started to say something to her, but felt the vibration of his cell phone and pulled it from his pocket. When he recognized the caller ID, he decided he should answer it.
“Uh, hello, Tom.”
“Tall, I’m sorry to bother you, but the President asked me to call you. We have a serious situation and need your help. To be honest, I don’t think even you can pull it off. Is this a good time to talk?”
“Actually, I. . .uh. . .”
The woman with the knife turned her attention to Tall and walked toward him, shouting obscenities in Arabic.
“. . .I’m in the middle of something right now,” Tall said into his phone.
The woman raised the knife above her head and ran at Tall.
“Can I call you back in a few minutes?”
Tall let his M16 dangle on a shoulder strap, pulled a Beretta M9 pistol from his shoulder holster and shot the woman in the chest. She staggered backward a few feet, then forward, and fell face down in front of him.
The voice on the phone hesitated, then said, “Uh, sure. Yes. Do that, please.”

* * *

Tall may seem like a cold-blooded monster for shooting the woman, but that’s not really what happened.  He didn’t really shoot her.  It was all part of the plan to take down the bus load of terrorists.
When the story progresses, Tall returns the call to the White House and gets his next assignment.  What the Presidents wants him to do is next to impossible, but Tall and his team have to try.  Innocent lives are at stake, and it all comes down to one shot.
RESCUE is available as an ebook for $0.99.  Details are available at http://earlwstaggs.wordpress.com
You’ll also find Chapter One of JUSTIFIED ACTION there.


Earl Staggs ©2014, 2017

Saturday, July 30, 2016

Barry Ergang Reviews: RESCUE (2013) by Earl Staggs

RESCUE (2013) by Earl Staggs


As I did in my review of Short Stories of Earl Staggs, I have to mention up front that Earl and I are old friends and editorial colleagues. That said, and based on some of the short stories of his I read before I ever got to know him, I thought he was an excellent storyteller.


"Rescue" underscores my contention. A novelette-length adventure, it stars Tallmadge "Tall" Chambers, who was introduced in the superb thriller Justified Action, and who has become the head of a secret nameless agency that puts terrorist groups out of business: “When a terrorist group was determined to have definite plans to strike and harm innocent people, the agency stepped in and stopped them by whatever actions were necessary. That included insurgent groups on American soil, homegrown and foreign, who thought the American way needed to be changed by violent methods.”

After preventing a busload of terrorists from killing attendees of a street festival in Abu Dhabi, Chambers and his crew, one member of which is on loan from the Air Force and utterly inexperienced in this sort of operation, are assigned by the President to effect a rescue of hostages from a location "in a rural area north of Dubai" so exposed on all sides that mounting a sneak attack is impossible.

To say any more would be to spoil a rapid-fire tale which deals with the kinds of regrettable real-life episodes we hear about in the news all too frequently at the time of this writing. It’s not likely that action and adventure fans will be disappointed by “Rescue”—with the possible exception of those offended by a few instances of the kind of street language which isn’t out of place in a story of this kind. (Relax! No f-bombs in a carload.)

Interested readers can find “Rescue” in multiple formats at Smashwords, and in the Kindle edition at Amazon.



© 2016 Barry Ergang

Some of Derringer Award-winner Barry Ergang’s work can be found at Amazon and Smashwords. The latter site has it on sale through the end of July.


Sunday, March 30, 2014

Sample Sunday: Excerpt From "RESCUE" by Earl Staggs

We end the month of March with a bang. This week Texas author and good friend Earl Staggs drops by to talk about his novella, Rescue. This ties into his novel Justified Action that he shared back in February here. Both books are good ones well worth your time.


In my novel JUSTIFIED ACTION, I introduced Tall Chambers.  After a twenty-year career in Army Special Forces, Tall joins a secretive agency which tracks terrorist groups and stops them before innocent people are harmed.  Tall puts all that aside, however, when someone close to him is murdered.  After that, he devotes his wits and weapons to finding the killer.
After JUSTIFIED ACTION was published (and received great reviews, I might add) I decided to write a short story featuring Tall and his team.  I called the story RESCUE, and it picks up after the novel with Tall’s team of professionals on a mission in the Middle East.
It turned out to be a long short story, coming in at just under 9,500 words.  That’s why I did something different and called it a “Mini Novel.”
This is the beginning of the first chapter of RESCUE.  



RESCUE
A Mini Novel in Five Chapters
featuring Tall Chambers

by Earl Staggs



CHAPTER ONE


Alongside a dirt road twenty miles east of Abu Dhabi, capital city of the United Arab Emirates, Tall Chambers crouched behind a boulder the size of a jeep. On his left, Mountain Brown rested on his knees. For a man who stood six-eight and carried well over three hundred pounds of tight muscle, that was as close to a crouch as he could get.
On Tall’s right, crouching easily six feet away, Airman First Class Kevin Mason shielded his eyes with an open hand and looked up at the blazing sun. “Sure is hot,” he said.
“Shouldn’t be much longer,” Tall said.
“You’re in a desert, boy,” Mountain grumbled. “It’s the middle of August and it’s only ten o’clock in the morning. By noon, it’ll hit a hundred and ten. If you can’t take the heat, get an office job.”
Tall grinned. Mountain liked to push buttons. Anyone’s.
“I can take the heat,” Kevin shot back. “Don’t worry about me, old timer.”
Tall liked it that Kevin stood up to the big man. Kevin was well-built and obviously worked out to stay that way, but was maybe five-eight with boots on and weighed one-sixty at most. Mountain could twist him into a pretzel without breaking a sweat. The kid had spunk.
Mountain leaned toward Tall and spoke in a low voice. “Who is that boy and what’s he doing here?”
“Our usual interpreter wasn’t available. The Air Force loaned him to us.”
“I know we need somebody speaks the language, but Christ! What is he, twelve?”
Tall chuckled. “He’s twenty-five, not as young as he looks.”
“Well, I feel a lot safer knowing I have a baby-faced interpreter watching my back. Does he know how to use that rifle he’s holding?”
“I looked over his records. He’s a qualified marksman, and he’s had some experience in recon ops.”
“Does he have any idea why we’re here?”
“No, I haven’t had time to read him in. I need to do that.”
Mountain raised his M-16 rifle and checked it again to make sure it was ready. “Okay, as long as I don’t have to babysit him.”
“He’ll be fine.” Tall lifted his binoculars and looked back down the road to his left. Thin swirling dust devils rose from the parched sandy soil and dissipated into gassy heat vapors. He felt like it was already a hundred and ten degrees.
He saw nothing coming and turned his attention to the other side of the road. He couldn’t see them, but he knew four more of his operatives were there, hiding behind boulders and squatty bushes dotting the flat desert landscape. Ben Goldman was one of the ops. Ben would set off the small explosive device buried in the road when Tall gave the signal.
Tall scooted over next to the Airman. “Kevin, just so you know what we’re doing here, a bus will be coming down this road any minute. On board is a group of armed Muslim terrorists on their way to a street festival in downtown Abu Dhabi. There’ll be a big crowd, many of them tourists and American service personnel. These people plan to mingle with the crowd, open fire, and kill as many as they can. Our plan is to stop them right here to make sure that doesn’t happen.”
“So we’re going to stop the bus and take them prisoner?”
Tall raised his binoculars again. “That’s up to them. We’ll give them a chance to surrender, and we hope they do. We want to take them in for interrogation. Some local politicians are supporting the group, and we want to find out who they are. But sometimes, these people choose to die for their cause. If that’s what they want, we’ll accommodate them.” He lowered the binoculars. “They’re coming. About a half mile away.”
Tall keyed his headset mic. “Get ready, Ben.”
“I see them,” Ben Goldman responded. “Let’s rock ‘n roll, Tall man.”
Tall turned back to Kevin. “When the bus stops, I want you to tell them in Arabic to put down their weapons and raise their hands in the air. Tell them if they don’t, we’ll open fire. Got it?”
“Got it.”
“Good. Then I want you to level your rifle on the bus driver. If he tries to move the vehicle or shows a weapon, shoot him.”
Kevin stared at him for a moment as if shocked he might be involved in a gunfight. He licked his dry lips and raised his rifle into firing position across the boulder. “Copy that, sir.”
A minute later, the bus, no more than an ancient flatbed truck with bench seats, two slat rails for sides and a ragged canvas roof, drew within thirty yards of where Tall and his team waited. Tall guessed about twenty of them on board, scattered throughout a vehicle large enough for twice as many. They wore Western clothing instead of traditional Arab outfits. To fit in with the festival crowd, he guessed, and he saw four women mixed in with them.
Tall keyed his mic and said, “Do it, Ben.”
No more than a second passed before an explosion ripped the still desert air and a wide geyser of dust and gravel spewed upward from the road in front of the bus. The driver pulled to a shrieking, sliding stop just short of the spot where Tall stood behind the boulder. Mountain Brown stepped sideways down the length of the vehicle with his weapon in firing position and stopped at the rear corner. Ben Goldman and three other operatives took up positions along the other side.
Kevin shouted what Tall had instructed him to say.
One of the women on the bus vaulted over the side rail and landed on the ground. She wore a black tee shirt and black pants and her dark hair frizzled in all directions. Her mouth was pulled into a tight line and her eyes flashed with rage. In her hand, she held a hunting knife with an eight-inch blade.
“Infidels!” she shouted with a thick accent. “I kill all you Yankee pigs!”
Ben Goldman moved to the front of the bus. He said and did nothing, but waited with the others to see what she would do next.
She moved toward Ben and tossed the knife back and forth from one hand to the other. “Come get me, American man. Come see how I slice you like melon. What’s your matter, dog shit bastard? You left your balls home with your momma?”
Tall started to say something to her, but felt the vibration of his cell phone and pulled it from his pocket. When he recognized the caller ID, he decided he should answer it.
“Uh, hello, Tom.”
“Tall, I’m sorry to bother you, but the President asked me to call you. We have a serious situation and need your help. To be honest, I don’t think even you can pull it off. Is this a good time to talk?”
“Actually, I. . .uh. . .”
The woman with the knife turned her attention to Tall and walked toward him, shouting obscenities in Arabic.
“. . .I’m in the middle of something right now,” Tall said into his phone.
The woman raised the knife above her head and ran at Tall.
“Can I call you back in a few minutes?”
Tall let his M16 dangle on a shoulder strap, pulled a Beretta M9 pistol from his shoulder holster and shot the woman in the chest. She staggered backward a few feet, then forward, and fell face down in front of him.
The voice on the phone hesitated, then said, “Uh, sure. Yes. Do that, please.”

* * *

Tall may seem like a cold-blooded monster for shooting the woman, but that’s not really what happened.  He didn’t really shoot her.  It was all part of the plan to take down the bus load of terrorists.
When the story progresses, Tall returns the call to the White House and gets his next assignment.  What the Presidents wants him to do is next to impossible, but Tall and his team have to try.  Innocent lives are at stake, and it all comes down to one shot.
RESCUE is available as an ebook for $.99.  Details are available at http://earlwstaggs.wordpress.com.
You’ll also find Chapter One of JUSTIFIED ACTION there.


Earl Staggs ©2014

Earl Staggs earned a long list of Five Star reviews for his novels MEMORY OF A MURDER and JUSTIFIED ACTION and has twice received a Derringer Award for Best Short Story of the Year.  He served as Managing Editor of Futures Mystery Magazine, as President of the Short Mystery Fiction Society, is a contributing blog member of Murderous Musings and Make Mine Mystery and a frequent speaker at conferences and seminars.   

Email: earlstaggs@sbcglobal.net 

Website: http://earlwstaggs.wordpress.com

Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Guest Reviewer Earl Staggs Reviews "The Rules" by Mark Troy

It is always a pleasure when Earl Staggs makes a guest appearance here on the blog. Not only is Earl a good friend, he is a two time Derringer award winning author with many short stories as well as novels to his credit. His most recent novel is the thriller featuring Tall Chambers titled Justified Action.  Tall Chambers is also featured in the just released “mini-novel” Rescue.




THE RULES
by Mark Troy
Ilium Books ISBN 978-0-9848081-3-7
Copyright © 2013 Mark Troy

Short Story Ebook  - $.99

Reviewed by Earl Staggs








EXCELLENT WRITER, IRRESISTIBLE HEROINE

You’ll love Ava Rome in Mark Troy’s story, The Rules.  You’ll also love spending time in Hawaii where the story takes place.  Mark knows the islands well and transports you there with skilled writing.


Ava Rome is sharp and she’s tough. In her profession, she has to be.  She protects people.  If your life’s in danger, hire Ava.  You know she’ll do her job because she prides herself on never breaking the hard and fast rules she set for herself. 


When Ava takes on the job of protecting a shadowy businessman’s son, however, sticking to her rules becomes a problem. Part of the problem is that besides being sharp and tough, she’s beautiful.  The young man she’s protecting wastes no time letting her know he’s attracted to her.   Ava is also human, and in spite of herself, finds herself in danger of breaking her most rigid rule.


This story moves at a fast pace and you’ll see how a professional in Ava’s line of work goes about doing her job.  All the while, suspense and tension build to a breathless, exciting climax. As a deadly storm rages outside, an even deadlier one erupts inside. Something completely unexpected happens, and Ava’s problem becomes keeping herself alive.


I highly recommend The Rules.  You can’t go wrong when Mark Troy writes about Ava Rome and Hawaii.



Earl Staggs ©2013
Rescue, Justified Action, Memory Of A Murder and more at your favorite bookstore and online at http://www.earlwstaggs.wordpress.com

Sunday, November 03, 2013

Earl Staggs Guest Posting

As Earl has advised on various lists over the weekend....

Texas author James R. Callan invited me to write a guest post for his site, "The Author's Blog."

So I did.

I call it "The Long and Short of it."  It's about a seven-foot-tall basketball player who marries a four-foot-tall jockey and they. . .

No, wait.  That's a different story.

This post is about writing both short and long and explains how it's easy when you know the difference.  Check it out and let me know what you think.

http://www.jamesrcallan.com/blog/tag/james-r-callans-blog/

 
Earl Staggs

JUSTIFIED ACTION featuring Tall Chambers available in print
or ebook.  “Now. . .it’s personal.”
Read Chapter One
at:  http://earlwstaggs.wordpress.com