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Showing posts with label Untreed Reads Publishing. Show all posts

Wednesday, January 11, 2023

Short Story Review: 13 Shots Of Noir by Paul D. Brazill


From the massively magnificent archive here at Casa Tipple and Home Eatery Library….

 

As noted in the subtitle of 13 Shots of Noir the e-book contains 13 short, sharp stories of booze, bullets and bodies. The read fully delivers on those aspects and plenty more. This collection of dark tales by Paul D. Brazill opens with “The Tut.” While comparisons to Edgar Allen Poe’s The Tell-Tale Heart are obvious, Oliver Robinson has his own particular version of the nightmare in his west London home. So much so he killed his wife, Gloria, just making things worse.

 

If you need “Anger Management” you could see a therapist. Or, you could channel it by joining up with “The Squad” which featured guys by the name of “Tubeway, Slammer” and Col. They go

 

beyond the idea of football hooliganism by adding mugging to the mix.  The four guys are so good at it they begin to get paid by Mr. Bettis who assigns them a specific job each month to accomplish.

 

Charlotte lives in East London in “The Friend Catcher.” The title of the story is also her name for a rather creepy neighbor who has tale of the past and a job for her.

 

When you are a serial killer sometimes you need an assistant. Even better if the assistant has a dog as made clear in “The Ballad Of The Kid.”

 

Though she came to the idea early, it took a long time for Carole Parker to actually plan to kill her husband in “The Man Behind The Curtain.” At least, that was her initial plan.

 

There are scores to settle at the party after the screening in “The Final Cut.” The public drama on film only hints at private situations.

 

Freddy in obsessed with a celebrity known as “M.” In the story by the same name Freddy is finally going to meet his obsession.

 

“Mr. Kiss and Tell: A Peter Ord Investigation” is one of the longer tales in the book. Told in five short parts, it follows the case of Billy Kirby, who wants to find his missing wife and son. They had good reason to flee all those years ago. Not that this private detective can’t be too choosy as he doesn’t have that many cases as it is.

 

Father Tim thought he was done hearing confessions at the end of one hot August day until Mad Mack showed up. Mad Mack has bloody feet, a busted lip, and other issues as well as quite the tale to tell. He wants to confess in “Sins of The Father.”

 

When you wake up after a night of heavy drinking with torn and bloody clothes and your bedroom is trashed you know things are not good. The fact that this sort of thing and more happens to one guy on a fairly regular basis is the point of the tale “Drunk on The Moon.”

 

Brendan Burke was well known for his regularity of a lifetime of habits. In “Everyday People” his regular schedule isn’t easy to maintain after being run down by a scooter. He is going to need some help once he gets home from the hospital.

 

Alison Day kept to herself and stayed out of things. That is until a stranger in the street collapsed at her feet in “Stamp Of A Vamp.”

 

“Thump” might mean somebody is in the pub in the ground floor. It might be her as she has not been around in a while. Or it might be something or someone else.

 

The 13 tales presented in 13 Shots Of Noir first appeared in 2009 and 2010 on a variety of websites. Some are mystery related, some are more super natural type tales, but all are good flash fiction or a little bit longer stories that are highly entertaining. At 63 pages this is a fast read and a good introduction to the work of Paul D. Brazill author of A Case Of Noir, Gumshoe, and Guns Of Brixton, among other works. Published by Untreed Reads, this is a quality read well worth your time.

 

 

Material was recently picked up to read and review during one of the author’s free read promotions. 

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2015, 2023

Wednesday, September 14, 2022

Short Story Wednesday Review: Shifting Is For The Goyim by Elizabeth Zelvin


From the massively magnificent archive…

 

It is worth noting that many of the reviews give away most, if not all, of the details behind the story. This review absolutely does not. This review, unlike many others out there at Amazon and elsewhere, is safe to read without ruining this very good novelette.


Far different in style and tone from the Bruce Kohler Series written by author Elizabeth Zelvin is Shifting Is For The Goyim recently released by Untreed Reads. Emerald Love is a singer and a good one. Thanks to Michael, her boyfriend and fellow musician, she has had several number one hits. Immensely popular she is now one of those one name artists such as Cher, Madonna, etc.  She’s come a long way from her home in Pumpkin Falls, New York.

With crowd leaving for their homes, she is now on the way to her family home for Passover. She’s missed the last five by way of being on tour, but there is no missing this one. For many reasons she will wish she had in this tale of the paranormal, death, faith, and family relationships.

This is a sometimes dark story of pain and loss for different from the often humorous Bruce Kohler Series. It is also incredibly good and features a complicated character, Emerald Love, who is very worthy of her own novel series. One hopes that such might be in the works based on this very complicated and very short mystery tale. 


Material supplied by the author in exchange for my objective review.

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2012, 2015, 2022

Wednesday, July 07, 2021

Short Story Wednesday Review: For The Good Of The Clan by Miles Archer

From the massive archive…

 

As For The Good Of The Clan begins, Ulat is pursuing a deer for his clan. He takes the deer down on an early spring day. Minutes later, he is taken down at least two blows from behind.

For Ledeth, the medicine man for the clan, this day has passed like others over his many years. His name translates to “one who knows secrets” and that sums up what he does on a daily basis. Revered and feared by his clan he is well aware that time waits for no creature. He feels a sense of urgency to impart his knowledge to Donathan who is his latest student. Donathan may have potential, but he is also not anywhere near ready to take on the responsibility of being the medicine man to the clan. For Ledeth this is a huge issue, as he knows his time for the long sleep is coming.

It is Ledeth who the people feel comfortable with coming to with their concerns. The oldest daughter, Matha, of his sister comes to him that night to tell him Ulat has not returned and she is very worried. When Ulat still has not returned the next day, Ledeth goes to Chief Balog to ask for clan members to be sent to look for Ulat. 

The search party sent out by Chief Balog soon fins Ulat’s body. Ledeth is assigned, not only the ceremonial funeral, but also the task of figuring out what happened to Ulat. Was it a fearsome boar as some believe, or was a member of the clan responsible for the death of the clan’s greatest hunter?

The death of Ulat has far reaching implications in For The Good Of The Clan by Miles Archer. Part of the Fingerprints Short Story Line published by Untreed Reads Publishing, the fast-moving story takes readers back to ancient times when spirits ruled the land and people did what they could to survive. Ledeth is on the case in a highly entertaining short story that moves steadily forward to a satisfying conclusion. For The Good Of The Clan by Miles Archer works quite well in terms of characters, action, and a strong mystery. A good read and one that is well worth it.  

For The Good Of The Clan

Miles Archer

Untreed Reads Publishing

http://www.untreedreads.com

February 2012

ASIN: B007F1W686

eBook

25 Pages

 

 

I purchased the book last month by way of funds in my Amazon Associate account. 

 

Kevin R. Tipple ©2016, 2021

Wednesday, December 23, 2020

Short Story Wednesday Review: Artie And The Long-Legged Woman by Jan Christensen

Another Wednesday means it is time for another short story review. Various things have conspired against me in recent days in one way or another, so on the docket today is a repeat review from way back in my dusty files. Today I offer you a reminder of Artie And The Long-Legged Woman by Jan Christensen.

 

If reading crime fiction has taught us anything it should be that a beautiful woman with sexy legs often means trouble. Years ago when Artie and Henry were teens and friends, Artie first noticed that Henry’s mom had great legs.  They were distinctive and he would recognize those great legs anywhere. Nearly twenty years later they still are incredible as is the rest of Mrs. Henderson. The same Mrs. Henderson who just stepped out of a white limo to talk to him in an alley. It has been a long time since he saw her and these days Mr. and Mrs. Henderson own a jewelry store. The same jewelry store Artie just successfully robbed.

 

Artie is good at his job and usually gets away with no one able to prove he did it. But, this time, Mrs. Henderson has security camera footage of what he just did. Not to mention the fact that she just caught him literally holding the bag with the loot. He can keep the loot he lifted as a down payment and she won’t use the security footage as long as Artie does the job she wants done.

 

This is a well written and highly entertaining tale by Texas author Jen Christensen much like her novel, Sara’s Search. A lot of character depth is packed into this fast moving and complicated tale.  Like her tale “Going Where the Wind Blows” in the anthology On Dangerous Ground: Stories of Western Noir there is more than one twist in Artie And the Long-Legged Woman available from Untreed Reads.

 

Good stuff. Period.


 

Artie And The Long-Legged Woman

Jan Christensen

http://www.janchristensen.com/

Untreed Reads Publishing

https://www.untreedreads.com/store/index.php?main_page=product_info&cPath=6_224&products_id=1932

eBook

21 Pages  

 

Material supplied by the author in exchange for my objective review. 

 

Kevin R. Tipple © 2011, 2014, 2020 

Tuesday, July 25, 2017

Earl Staggs Reviews: From Hay To Eternity: Ten Devilish Tales of Crime and Deception by Sandra Murphy

It has been a very long time since Earl Staggs came by with a review. Today he reviews the new short story collection, From Hay To Eternity: Ten Devilish Tales of Crime and Deception by Sandra Murphy.


In the ten stories in this collection, Sandra Murphy exhibits her deliciously inventive imagination to create stories and memorable characters which will involve you and entertain you from beginning to end.

Here's a sampling.

In “Superstition,” a woman ponders them all:  stepping on a crack, walking under a ladder, a black cat crossing your path,  three black birds on your roof mean death, and more.  What is real and what is foolish imagination and silliness?  Once she figures it out, she knows what she must do. 

“The Chicken Pot Pie Fiasco,” concerns a large quirky family in the process of preparing their own traditional Thanksgiving meal. In this family, it's a huge chicken pot pie.  Our narrator, who manages too observe it all without getting involved due to his “stealth,” explains, “There’s one big pie, and if there’s some of the inside stuff left over, there are little pies for later. I like that part.”   Everyone adds their own favorite ingredients, but a surprise ingredient somehow gets added which no one expected.

For “The Space Heater vs. the Window Fan,” we meet a woman who only needs to get dressed and prettied up for her sister's wedding. Unfortunately, every necessary machine, from her computer to the local laundromat's equipment, refuses to cooperate and do its part, culminating in a major struggle with one particularly stubborn appliance.

The title story, “From Hay to Eternity,” takes on a darker turn and gives us a murder mystery.  It begins with the driver announcing, “Welcome to the hayride. Listen up! Find a seat on the bench or one of the hay bales and hold on. Our horse, Sam, sometimes rocks the wagon when he starts, but it will be a smooth ride after that.”

Riders on the haywagon include a cross section of local parents and children, along with a pair of feuding brothers and an attention-grabbing teenage girl wearing tiny cut-off jeans and a tight top  designed to “show what your momma gave you.”  Her goal is to turn the hayride into a photo op which will make her the next supermodel.  She has no idea that one photo will turn the hayride into something other than a smooth ride.  

There are six more stories in this collection and each one is a delightful gem. Sandra Murphy is an author to watch. Her stories will not disappoint.

·      Print Length: 90 pages
·      Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
·      Publisher: Untreed Reads (May 25, 2017)
·      Publication Date: May 25, 2017
·      Sold by: Amazon Digital Services LLC
·      Language: English
·      ASIN: B0714MY8CD


           
Earl Staggs © 2017

Texas author Earl Staggs earned all Five Star reviews for his novels MEMORY OF A MURDER and JUSTIFIED ACTION and has twice received a Derringer Award for Best Short Story of the Year. He served as Managing Editor of Futures Mystery Magazine, as President of the Short Mystery Fiction Society, and is a frequent speaker at conferences and seminars.

He invites any comments via email at earlstaggs@sbcglobal.net

He also invites you to visit his blog site at http://earlwstaggs.wordpress.com to learn more about his novels and stories.


Thursday, September 22, 2016

Review: For The Good Of The Clan by Miles Archer

As For The Good Of The Clan Ulat is pursuing a deer for his clan. He takes the deer down on an early spring day. Minutes later, he is taken down at least two blows from behind.

For Ledeth, the medicine man for the clan, this day has passed like others over his many years. His name translates to “one who knows secrets” and that sums up what he does on a daily basis. Revered and feared by his clan he is well aware that time waits for no creature. He feels a sense of urgency to impart his knowledge to Donathan who is his latest student. Donathan may have potential, but he is also not anywhere near ready to take on the responsibility of being the medicine man to the clan. For Ledeth this is a huge issue, as he knows his time for the long sleep is coming.

It is Ledeth who the people feel comfortable with coming to with their concerns. The oldest daughter, Matha, of his sister comes to him that night to tell him Ulat has not returned and she is very worried. When Ulat still has not returned the next day, Ledeth goes to Chief Balog to ask for clan members to be sent to look for Ulat.  

The search party sent out by Chief Balog soon fins Ulat’s body. Ledeth is assigned, not only the ceremonial funeral, but also the task of figuring out what happened to Ulat. Was it a fearsome boar as some believe, or was a member of the clan responsible for the death of the clan’s greatest hunter?

The death of Ulat has far reaching implications in For The Good Of The Clan by Miles Archer. Part of the Fingerprints Short Story Line published  by Untreed Reads Publishing, the fast moving story takes readers back to ancient times when spirits ruled the land and people did what they could to survive. Ledeth is on the case in a highly entertaining short story that moves steadily forward to a satisfying conclusion. For The Good Of The Clan by Miles Archer works quite well in terms of characters, action, and a strong mystery. A good read and one that is well worth it.  


 

For The Good Of The Clan
Miles Archer
Untreed Reads Publishing
February 2012
ASIN: B007F1W686
eBook
25 Pages
$0.99


I purchased the book last month by way of funds in my Amazon Associate account.


Kevin R. Tipple ©2016


Wednesday, June 15, 2016

Guest Post: Kaye George on "Triple Trouble: Neanderthals added to Fat Cats and Musicians"

Please welcome back author Kaye George who is on a roll with new releases…..

 
Triple Trouble: Neanderthals added to Fat Cats and Musicians


I’m back. Already, you say? I just posted here that I had two released a week apart. That wasn’t the end of it, though. Two months after those, I have another release, DEATH ON THE TREK, June 13th. I would, of course, love for you to buy it and read it. But first I’d like to talk about research for these prehistory books.


The mysteries center on a Neanderthal tribe that I have, with poetic license, transported to what is now USA, North America. Neanderthals have been found in many parts of Europe and Asia. In fact, their remains keep being discovered farther and farther east. I’ll be just as astounded as anyone else if their fossils ever turn up on this continent, but I’ll also be overjoyed. (I located them here because I want to include the fantastic mega-fauna of that time and place.)


What do we know about Neanderthals? More and more, especially since mapping the complete genome. We know that at least two individuals were red headed and pale skinned, one from El Sidron in Spain and one from Monte Lessini in Italy.(1) That information has been available since 2007. We also know that they interbred with the other peoples in Europe, since there is evidence of that in the genes of everyone with European ancestry. I, myself, am 2.9% Neanderthal. We also know that they were physically capable of speech.(2) However, when I began writing the first book, DEATH IN THE TIME OF ICE, one of the textbooks I bought stated that most scientists agreed there was no cross-mating, and that they were incapable of speaking.


Here’s what I did with these pieces of research. They represent a small fraction of my studies. I made some members of the Hamapa tribe blond, some redheaded, and some brunette. I put in isolated instances of inter-mating with Cro-Magnons. I took the middle ground with speech. I gave them speech (after tons of research on how babies and disabled people learn to speak, as well as on early, primitive languages), but reserved it for ceremonial occasions. Yes, I even made up their language. I learned that sounds at the front of the mouth are easier to say, so most of their names and words are spoken there. No gutturals, no difficult consonant blends, and mostly short words.


So, if they rarely spoke, how did they communicate? For that, I studied the Australian aborigines and some others, and gave my tribe telepathy.


The great thing about writing events that took place 35,000 years ago is that no one is going to prove me wrong about anything. They can speculate and theorize, but in the areas where I took liberties, such as making the tribe matriarchal and letting the women throw spears (for that matter, letting anyone throw them, since some people think they couldn’t have done that), I’m free to do my own theorizing.


I will say that I stick to all the facts that I know (except that they were in North America). The way they built houses and villages is documented, and some of their art, jewelry, tools, and musical instruments. (OK, one instrument, a flute.) It’s just that we don’t know nearly everything about Neanderthals. Sometimes I do worry that a new discovery will directly contradict something I wrote, but it hasn’t happened yet!


Here’s a bit about the new book:
The Neanderthal tribe of Enga Dancing Flower must trek south to flee the approaching glacier, but the distance is long and the food is scarce. When a venerable elder drowns crossing a flooded river, Enga suspects that it was not an accident, and that a murderer travels with them.



This book is available at Ingram and other booksellers and is published in paperback, hardcover, and digital. Audio is coming!


(2) Neanderthals, an archaic human species that dominated Europe until the arrival of
modern humans some 45,000 years ago, possessed a critical gene known to
underlie speech, according to DNA evidence retrieved from two individuals
excavated from El Sidron, a cave in northern Spain.
The New York Times, Neanderthals Had Important Speech Gene, DNA
Evidence Shows, by Nicholas Wade, October 19, 2007



Kaye George ©2016

Kaye George, national-bestselling and multiple-award-winning author, writes several mystery series: Imogene Duckworthy, Cressa Carraway (Barking Rain Press), People of the Wind (Untreed Reads), and, as Janet Cantrell, the Fat Cat cozy mysteries. (Berkley Prime Crime). Her short stories appear in anthologies, magazines, and her own collection, A Patchwork of Stories. She reviews for Suspense Magazine. She lives in Knoxville, TN. http://kayegeorge.com/

Thursday, March 03, 2016

Guest Post: Ian Lewis on "The Most Important Thing a Writer Can Do to Hone His or Her Craft"

Please welcome author Ian Lewis to the blog today.....

The Most Important Thing a Writer Can Do to Hone His or Her Craft
           
Serious writers have different goals. Some are looking to land a publishing contract, hoping they’ve written the next best seller. Some just want a creative outlet, unhampered by genre constraints. Others, like me, always seek to combine both. It’s that balance of industry validation and creative expression that few artists, regardless of medium, ever achieve. One either has to sacrifice art for pop-culture and commercialism, or accept obscurity and anonymity in whatever rich, imaginative world he or she invents.

There is one thing that binds all serious writers together, and that is the desire to hone their craft. In my experience, time spent reading other fiction, attending writing conferences, or reading books/articles about writing will never be as valuable as active participation in a critiquing group. Nowhere else will you find as much encouragement and motivation to keep writing. It’s the one thing that saved me as a writer.

It was circa 2007. I had given up writing for several years when I was approached by a friend to join her critiquing group. As luck would have it, I had the beginnings of my first novella, “The Camaro Murders,” simmering in my head, and so I was already thinking about writing again. What I found at the first meeting was eye opening.

Writing is such a solitary task that I assumed all writers toiled away on their own. Never for once did I consider there were others looking to help each other improve their writing skills, but I found myself in the company of such people. They were a diverse bunch, both in age and tastes in fiction. I found that their editorial strengths varied as well—and therein lays one of the major benefits of a critiquing group.

You can re-read your work fifty times and miss the obvious errors. However, when you have free editors at your disposal, the feedback will cover the gamut of grammar to character development. Each one of your “editors” will have his or her soapbox; one will needle you about comma usage (or lack thereof), another will mark-up your manuscript with word and phrasing suggestions. All feedback should be considered, especially when more than one person picks up on the same thing. That’s usually a sure sign that a revision is in order.

I kept attending the meetings and the creative juices never stopped flowing. At first, I only submitted short stories to the group. I had a grasp of the technical side of writing; it was the storytelling that I needed to develop. I took my lumps, but stuck with it until I saw “The Camaro Murders” through to completion. Because we met regularly and the feedback was constructive, I was able to get beyond the first few pages of a story, which is where many new writers find themselves stuck.

That’s the other huge benefit. A committed group will instill discipline in you, inspire you, and motivate you. With fellow writers in your midst who are committed to the craft, your own writing will take on new life because it’s no longer just an idea. It’s on paper, being read (albeit by a limited audience). That was a game-changer for me; my stories came to life by virtue of sharing them with the group.

Not long after this, Untreed Reads offered me a contract for “The Camaro Murders.” The story is a stark account of a small town murder from four points of view—one of them from beyond the grave. It never would’ve seen the light of day without the valuable feedback from the group.

Continued participation in the group reaped further dividends. “The Camaro Murders” led to “Lady in Flames,” the second novella in what is now a loose series featuring a ghostly character known as the Driver. I even forayed into Science Fiction with “Power in the Hands of One”—an homage to mecha anime such as Voltron and the Big O. Both novellas were also published by Untreed Reads.

Nearly a decade after joining the group, I’ve moved on to larger projects. I’ve completed a full length dystopian political thriller as well as a short novel that will serve as the third entry in the Driver series. I’m shopping both of them around right now in addition to writing the sequel to said thriller. I’m even doing some ghost-writing on the side. Despite the multiple fires I’ve got going, I still regularly attend my critiquing group. The return on investment is still invaluable.

I can’t encourage other writers enough to join a group. Inquire at your local library, or use your friend Google to find an existing group in your area. Some writers prefer smaller, more private groups with trusted friends. Whatever the case, get involved with other writers. If you want to start your own group, here are some guidelines that work well for ours:
1.      Meet regularly at the same place. (We meet on the third Saturday of every month at the local library).
2.      No more than five submissions will be reviewed at a session (given a 1 ½ to 2 hour session). Submissions six, seven, etc. roll over to the next month.
3.      Submissions are distributed via e-mail 1-2 weeks prior.
4.      Each member comes prepared with a marked-up manuscript of each submission, ready to share constructive feedback.
5.      Submissions are reviewed in the order they were submitted.
6.      Ideas, subject matter, and authors are not attacked; the writing is the only thing that can be critiqued. All feedback must be constructive.
7.      If the group is large enough, each person’s feedback may need to be timed (e.g. 1 minute per) to ensure you get through all of the submissions.
8.      The author of each submission gets time to respond to feedback after everyone has shared in turn.
9.      You must critique two consecutive times before being allowed to submit your own work. If you miss a month or two, you must critique twice again before submitting again. This encourages regular participation in the group instead of permitting people to drop in when they need something edited.

I hope you’ll consider joining a critiquing group if you don’t already belong to one. The beauty of membership is that you’re compelled to do the very thing that will make you a better a writer, and that is writing itself.

I still very much appreciate constructive feedback, even for my published works. Please leave a review if you’re compelled to read something of mine. Keep in mind that for the month of March, all eBooks at Untreed Reads will be on sale for 30% off. This includes all three of my releases with them and is a great opportunity to pick up some great new books for cheap. 

Ian Lewis ©2016
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Wednesday, December 16, 2015

Guest Post: Judy Penz Sheluk--- When More Needs Less: The Story Behind BEAUTIFUL KILLER

Please welcome back author Judy Penz Sheluk with another insightful column regarding one of her recently published short stories…..



When More Needs Less: The Story Behind BEAUTIFUL KILLER

In my previous post on Kevin’s Corner, I wrote about When Less Needs More, the story behind my debut mystery novel, The Hanged Man’s Noose. But sometimes, I found out, More Needs Less.

I’d been working and reworking “Beautiful Killer” for the past five years under a few different titles. Oh, not constantly, but once every few months I’d trot it out, expand on the story, realize that something about it still wasn’t working, and file it back in my unfinished short story folder. In truth, I’d never had so much difficulty with a story. Even my novel was less problematic.

There were many times I wanted to just give up on it. But the main character, Carly, continued to haunt me, and while a lot of the story didn’t work, I continued to like the beginning:



“The whole of the Quick River is about three miles long and a few yards wide, an insignificant tributary that cuts through the heart of Quick County. Billy used to call it Speedy Creek.

It’s been twenty years since I’ve been back, and at first glance not much has changed.
The cluster of clapboard cabins dotting the Quick’s rocky shoreline still needs a good coat of fire, and the public dock still leans haphazardly to the left. Even the Quick ’n Slow Diner seems stuck in time, its chinked logs weather-beaten to a dull gray, the tables inside scarred by decades of hot plates and hard times.”



And so I kept on tinkering, until one day, fate in the form of J. Alan Hartman, the publisher at Untreed Reads, intervened. Jay decided it was time for the Short Mystery Fiction Society (SMFS) to release an anthology with stories written by its members. In September 2014, the call came out for submissions to Flash and Bang. The criteria: Flash stories needed to be between 300 and 1000 words. Short stories needed to be between 1500 and 3000 words. Furthermore, each story had to contain either a “flash” or a “bang,” although the interpretation could be loosely drawn.

Hmm, I thought. Carly’s story is told with a flashback to her past. That could count as a flash. But could I get my unmanageable short story, which had ranged anywhere from 1,200 to 2,500 words depending on the incarnation, down to 1000 words or less? And would that, at long last, make it work?

I started by removing any unnecessary adjectives. No more green grass when grass would do. I tightened up the dialogue between Carly and Danny Porter, the owner of the aforementioned Quick ’n Slow Diner. Finally, I edited down the backstory to just a hint of what it once was. Satisfied, I checked the word count: 993 excluding the title. Voila!
But did it work? I decided to leave it for a couple of months when I could reread it with fresh eyes.

It was January 2015, about three weeks ahead of submission deadline, when I revisited Beautiful Killer. And for the first time since I’d started writing it, I still liked it. Liked it enough, in fact, to submit it to Jay for consideration in Flash and Bang. Receiving the email from him with a “yes” was a welcome validation. Not just validation for the story and the honor I felt at being part of something truly special, but validation for the process, the patience that is so often required in our craft, and for finally understanding that sometimes more really does need to be less.


Judy Penz Sheluk ©2015


Bio
Judy Penz Sheluk’s debut mystery, The Hanged Man’s Noose, was published July 2015. Her short crime fiction is included in The Whole She-Bang 2, World Enough and Crime, and most recently, Flash and Bang, the first anthology by members of the Short Mystery Fiction Society.

Judy is a member of Sisters in Crime, Crime Writers of Canada, International Thriller Writers and the Short Mystery Fiction Society. Find Judy at www.judypenzsheluk.com  where she blogs about the writing life and interviews other authors.

Buy Links
The Hanged Man’s Noose is available in print and eBook at http://www.barkingrainpress.org/dd-product/hanged-mans-noose/,  and all the usual suspects including Amazon http://authl.it/3jg.

Flash and Bang is available in print and eBook from Untreed Reads http://store.untreedreads.com, as well as all the usual suspects, including Amazon http://authl.it/3wb.    

Social Media Links




Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/JudyPenzSheluk  @JudyPenzSheluk



Friday, December 11, 2015

FFB Review: "Shifting Is For The Goyim" by Elizabeth Zelvin

Friday means Friday’s Forgotten Books hosted by Patti Abbott. I first reviewed this back in 2012 and enjoyed it quite a lot. If you have not picked this one up already consider doing so. Also make sure you head over to Patti’s blog for the list of FFB reading suggestions today as December rolls on…..

It is worth noting that many of the reviews give away most, if not all, of the details behind the story.
This review absolutely does not. This review, unlike many others out there at Amazon and elsewhere, is safe to read without ruining this very good novelette.

Far different in style and tone from the Bruce Kohler Series written by author Elizabeth Zelvin is Shifting Is For The Goyim recently released by Untreed Reads. Emerald Love is a singer and a good one. Thanks to Michael, her boyfriend and fellow musician, she has had several number one hits. Immensely popular she is now one of those one name artists such as Cher, Madonna, etc.  She’s come a long way from her home in Pumpkin Falls, New York.

With crowd leaving for their homes she is now on the way to her family home for Passover. She’s missed the last five by way of being on tour, but there is no missing this one. For many reasons she will wish she had in this tale of the paranormal, death, faith, and family relationships.

This is a sometimes dark story of pain and loss for different from the often humorous Bruce Kohler Series. It is also incredibly good and features a complicated character, Emerald Love, who is very worthy of her own novel series. One hopes that such might be in the works based on this very complicated and very short mystery tale.



Shifting Is For The Goyim
Elizabeth Zelvin                                                                                 
Untreed Reads Publishing
July 2012
E-Book Only
Estimated print length 33 pages
$2.99


Material supplied by the author in exchange for my objective review.



Kevin R. Tipple ©2012, 2015