BSP Sunday ---- Carpathian Shadows: Volume 2

I hate plugging my own stuff. But, since word of mouth is not doing much of anything for sales, I thought this Sunday I would provide you a small sample from my story “By The Light Of The Moon…” in the published anthology Carpathian Shadows: Volume 2.  My story blends elements of science fiction, mystery, and horror to fill the premise set forth by the publisher. 

Available in e-book direct from the publisher  http://www.booksforabuck.com/ as well as online at your favorite retailer, the book is also available in print from me for $10.00  Not only does that include postage and handling, I will gladly autograph it at your request.

By the Light Of the Moon…

"Is he here?"

"Yes, Commander."

"How is he?"

What he was asking was whether or not the suspect had made it alive into his station. He should have but sometimes accidents happened in the field. The young officer stepped a little ways into the room. New to his job, he was working hard to impress, which is why the Commander had chosen him. Things had to be contained, and he knew he could keep the man, more like a boy at twenty, in line.

"Typical American." The young officer couldn't keep the scorn out of his voice, "Very emotional. Fits of screaming and crying when we placed the cuffs on him. He's sitting quietly in Interrogation 4 now."

"Good. That will be all."

The young man saluted, swiveled in his black spit-polished boots, and strode confidently out of the office. The Commander sat back and smiled to himself while he listened to the pleasurable sound of the boots striking the floor fade away down the long hall. To be young again and so sure of righteousness, of purpose. Not that it really mattered, as fate ordained everything.  His die was cast long ago, as was my own, he thought, and the idea depressed him as it had the last few months.

He stood and stretched feeling his spine pop before he walked down the same hall. Unlike the young man before him who had turned right so that he could pass the front desk and go back out on patrol, the Commander turned left, and with a few steps, began to feel like the walls were closing in on him. The truth was they were as he journeyed deeper into the old section of the garrison. This part had been built into the mountain long ago, and the Commander secretly suspected that there had to be a tunnel from here up to the castle far above. He suspected it but had never tried to find out because he knew that in such matters, a lack of knowledge was safer than knowing the truth….

The thoughts of two different reviewers about the book…….

“I had some qualms about it when this book was given me to review. I'm not a fan of the paranormal or the fantasy story. It requires too much suspension of disbelief to enjoy the antics of vampires and werewolves and zombies. But I had accepted the book, so I read it. All of the stories are based around the premise of vacationers visiting an old castle in the Transylvania area of Romania (Dracula country). One or more of the characters in each story gets caught up in some kind of mysterious action involving ghosts and other-wordly creatures. I found the stories mostly well written and suspenseful. The characters were fully developed and quite believable until they slipped into the realm of the paranormal. I enjoyed the stories that didn't get too far out. A few got into areas that were more than I could take, but if you're a fan of this genre, you'd probably love `em. It isn't a large book but would provide an evening of exciting reading. Don't read it by yourself in a dark room, however.” Chester Campbell

“First, let me say up front, this bills itself as Volume 2. Having not read Volume 1, I can state with certainty that this book works as a stand alone, in case anyone worries about that.

This is a theme-anthology, horror stories with a bit of a twist. The visitors to the Cornifu Hotel, deep in the Carpathians Mountains of Transylvania, are individually invited for a free one day bus excursion to nearby Erdely Castle, said to be haunted. Each story is about a different group of travelers to visit the castle. And with that setting and that common theme, one can rightly expect vampires and ghosts and werewolves--just about all those things that go bump in the night show up here.

As in any anthology of stories by different writers, the quality of the writing varies--and, of course, readers' tastes are different, which is to say what one likes, another may not. I did not find any real clunkers here, but I did find some that I preferred over others.

To my tastes, one of the standouts in the book would have to be The Scholar by author Seana Graham. Most of the tales here are focused on the supernatural, as is to be expected, but this is really a well written story of a mismatched marriage and "the other man," with the scary stuff more of the frosting on the cake. It's a bit less fanciful than some and not particularly horrific (though not without a creepy moment or two), but it compensates with well sketched characters and believable interactions.

Kristin Johnson's vampire story, Divine Curse, seemed a bit murky to me, but that in itself is not altogether inappropriate to the genre. A bit of ambiguity can be an asset in spooky fiction. This is, after all, a genre that dispenses with conventional reality. And, this tale stands out for its gay elements, not usually found in horror collections. So, I give it a passing grade, but not without some reservations.

Hear No Evil, Speak No Evil by Donna Amato is likewise ambiguous, particularly in its ending, and the cast of characters occasionally seems to be tripping over one another, but the writer manages to make the implausible reasonably plausible, which is as much as one can fairly ask of horror fiction. Let's face it, parts of Dean Koontz's books make no sense at all. The real question is whether the writer can carry the reader along, and Ms. Amato does that admirably.

A Visitor From the Past by Carol A. Cole is somewhat of a time travel, or maybe, more correctly, dimensional-travel. Anna has been short-tempered with her husband, Rob, since returning from a trip to Germany months earlier, and this trip is intended to rekindle their relationship, but the results are not what Rob expected. Many of these stories have downer endings. This one is more bitter sweet. I found that it lingered with me after I had finished reading.

The other standout, for me, is Kevin Tipple's By the Light of the Moon. While most of the stories in the book follow a quickly familiar plot line--the busload of tourists comes to the castle, a storm strands them there, and mysterious events follow--this one distinguishes itself by going its own way. To be sure, there is the bus, and tourists at the castle and eerie doings, but Tipple sets his story elsewhere and afterward, and we hear about the events at the castle in flashback narratives. It's a tricky sort of structure but he pulls it off neatly.

In short, this is not great literature--it surely wasn't intended to be--but if horror is your cup of tea, I can heartily recommend this for a couple of hours of goose-bump reading.” Victor J. Banis

I have always said my story “By The Light Of The Moon…” was not horror though it may have a creepy crawly element or two to it. I think of my story as a science fiction/ fantasy piece with mystery. It is very different than the normal kind of thing and as a result almost didn’t make the book. I am very glad it did.

I hope you will take a look.