For this first Friday in November, Barry reminds you of this western. After you read his review and mosey around here awhile, make sure you ride over to Patti Abbott’s blog as well as Aubrey Nye Hamilton’s Happiness Is A Warm Book blog and see what they suggest today. Todd Mason is back collecting links so you will have even more suggestions om his Sweet Freedom blog later.
SON OF A WANTED MAN (1984) by Louis L’Amour
During the course of the past
year and a half or thereabouts, I’ve become happily reacquainted with one of
the joys of my childhood, the western. It began when Turner Classic Movies ran
a Roy Rogers movie marathon. This in turn prompted me to rent Hopalong Cassidy
films from Netflix, and to buy some from Amazon.com. I also rented movies,
primarily the kind of B-westerns I grew up watching on TV in the early 1950s,
featuring other cowboy stars: Buck Jones, Bob Steele, Allan “Rocky” Lane, Lash
LaRue, “Wild Bill” Elliott, Tim Holt, Dick Foran, Charles Starrett as the
Durango Kid, and Bob Livingston, Ray “Crash” Corrigan, and Max Terhune as the
Three Mesquiteers. My Netflix queue is loaded with others yet to come.
For all that I enjoyed
watching westerns, I’d read very few. Except for a handful of short stories
(mostly found at the Online Pulps
website), the only novel I’d read was Cormac McCarthy’s All
the Pretty Horses. I remembered Louis L’Amour from his instant
best-sellerdom years ago. When a neighbor’s yard sale made his Son of a
Wanted Man available, I bought it.
In it we meet Mike Bastian,
who has been raised from childhood by his adoptive father, Ben Curry, for the
life of a successful outlaw. As one of his “trainers,” a man named Roundy,
says:
“…You can track like an
Apache. In the woods you’re a ghost, and I doubt if old Ben Curry himself can
throw a gun as fast and accurate as you. You can ride anything that wears hair,
an’ what you don’t know about cards, dice, roulette, and all the rest of it,
nobody knows. You can handle a knife, fight with your fists, and open anything
made in the way of safes and locks.
“Along with that he’s seen
you got a good education, so’s you can handle yourself in any kind of company.
I doubt if any boy ever got the education and training you’ve had, and now Ben
is ready to step back an’ let you take over.”
Ben Curry has never been
caught because he’s smart, he’s a careful planner, and unlike other outlaws, he
doesn’t want a “reputation.” His wife and daughters, who live back east, don’t
know anything about this aspect of his life. They think he’s a rancher named
Ben Ragan whose business transactions keep him traveling a great deal of the
time. Curry has been highly selective about the men he uses to pull off the
robberies he plans. He wants men who also don’t seek to advertise themselves as
tough criminals.
What he doesn’t know is that
two tough lawmen, Borden Chantry and Tyrel Sackett, have begun to detect a
pattern in his modus operandi, and are closing in.
Mike Bastian’s problem?
Deciding whether he wants to lead an outlaw’s life or stick to the straight
path.
As events unfold, the matter
is largely decided when Curry’s life and the life of one of his daughters,
Juliana, is threatened by a band of men Curry recruited and who have, for
years, benefited by his recruitment. Harrowing circumstances compel Bastian and
others loyal to Curry to try to hunt down these renegades. Among the hunters is
Curry’s other daughter, Drusilla, to whom Bastian is strongly attracted—and vice
versa.
Since this is the first novel
I’ve read by the late Louis L’Amour, I can only assume it’s representative of
the way he wrote his many other novels. He was clearly a storyteller, and a man
who wrote in a style free of any verbal furbelows and flourishes. The story
itself is compelling, even if there are passages here and there that are
repetitious, and despite the intimacy between Mike Bastian and Drusilla Ragan
that strikes me as abrupt and false as the almost instant, unlikely connections
seen in many B-western films.
L’Amour has one mannerism—in
this book, at least—that’s annoying in its misuse. He’s fond of sentences that
open with participial phrases, sentences meant to describe simultaneous
actions. All too often, the simultaneities he describes are impossible. If I
write, for example, “Striding across the floor of the bunkhouse, he unbuckled
his holster,” the reader can picture someone walking and unbuckling at the same
time. Now consider a line from L’Amour. After telling us that Borden Chantry
“went to the stove for the coffeepot,” implying that he had to rise from his
seat, move across the room, and then fill his and Sackett’s cups, he writes,
“Returning the pot to the stovetop, he sat down, straddling his chair,”
suggesting that Chantry is the Old West’s equivalent of Plastic Man. Here’s a
“twofer”: “Walking back to the table Dru took the chimney from the lamp, struck
a match, and touched it to the wick. Replacing the lamp globe she drew back a
chair.” This is a flexible, multi-talented multi-tasker!
In both examples, the addition
of the word “after” at the beginning of each sentence would have corrected the
errors.
You may have also noted that
the second L’Amour example could stand some commas. Which is to say that Bantam
Books, the publisher, could have used a good copy editor. Then again,
considering the general quality of book editing for years now, along with the
way English is taught, I’m not sure the majority of readers will notice the
grammatical nits I’ve picked.
Nits notwithstanding, Son
of a Wanted Man is a fast-paced, exciting piece of entertainment. It may
not be a masterpiece, but it’s a lot better than a Tex Ritter movie.
Barry Ergang @2009, 2020
Derringer Award-winner Barry Ergang’s written work has appeared in numerous publications, print and electronic. Some of it is available at Amazon and at Smashwords. His website is http://www.writetrack.yolasite.com/.
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